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Two Friends Posted on 11-06-2004

AggieWarrior
Charlotte, NC
Here's a lil poem/story that i just thought of Two friends: There were these two friends, a boy and a girl; The girl longed for him, wanting to be his diamond and his pearl; The only drawback was: he already had a girl As time went on, the feelings became very strong; To the point where boy's girl treated him wrong; Even though they had problems, he still wanted to work things out; But the girl wanted to show the boy what true love is all about; We all know that love makes us do crazy things; So she crept into his bed and had a fling; Soon after they did their thing, she got bad news: She was carryin his baby; When she asked him if he was gonna take care of it, he said "maybe"; 9 months later, a beautiful baby boy was born, but the girl was torn; She hadn't heard from her old friend in 9 months, and it got to the point where the nerves were worn... So she grabbed a gun, and killed herself... leavin the baby boy by himself When word got out to the boy, he acted like it was no big deal; but what goes around comes around through this whole ordeal... His girlfriend gets pregnant, and she doesn't know who the daddy is.. His nerves get rattled, then he thinks about what he did to his former friend who passed ... so he takes a gun, puts it to his chest.. and blows it away.... leavin the baby all alone...
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In Rod We Trust replied on 11-06-2004 02:58PM [Reply]
Damn It went from Jack and Jill to Romeo and Juliet
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replied on 11-06-2004 11:13PM [Reply]
That was hot Uncle Waynehead. ::four snaps and a fambo clap:: lovin it 8)
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P o e t i q R e i g n from Greensboro, NC replied on 11-14-2004 04:43PM [Reply]

damn, dham - what inspired this??
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jadekiss replied on 11-14-2004 06:50PM [Reply]
Good gracioius! That was almost as disturbing and real as it was good....
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AggieWarrior from Charlotte, NC replied on 11-16-2004 07:35PM [Reply]

P o e t i q R e i g n wrote:
damn, dham - what inspired this??
a certain situation a long time ago :? just wanted to get it out and show that i can write too
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replied on 11-17-2004 01:14AM [Reply]
AggieWarrior wrote:
P o e t i q R e i g n wrote:
damn, dham - what inspired this??
a certain situation a long time ago :? just wanted to get it out and show that i can write too
^^Aint mad atcha Uncle 8)
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~*Secret*~ replied on 11-21-2004 02:28AM [Reply]
dang d...we gon have to talk about this one :?
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