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Revenge in Sweet Compromise Posted on 02-21-2005
Wisdom_Tree

I see through your need to Want me to bleed too Equally, we're see-through Equally, we need truth But you can't hear, and I can't speak What you can't learn and I can't teach Cuz I can't preach... Other lips lies packed my bags, you beseech: You left them? No, you let them... You recollect them more than you forget them Ever since you met them You lost your reflection Sense of direction then blame my Skin complexion Why stretch the truth to fit a lie? Now I'm deaf and you're blind In your sight and your mind I'll make this easy. Leave me If you dont believe me Id rather see you be free Than decieve me to please me. (fin)
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replied on 06-03-2005 10:41PM [Reply]
BigDaddy Tres wrote:
Poetry.com sent me something about bein a semi finalist...whoo hoo i guess...(for this poem)
Congratulations mayne. That's definitely watsup.
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replied on 06-03-2005 10:46PM [Reply]
BigDaddy Tres wrote:
I see through your need to Want me to bleed too Equally, we're see-through Equally, we need truth But you can't hear, and I can't speak What you can't learn and I can't teach Cuz I can't preach... Other lips lies packed my bags, you beseech: You left them? No, you let them... You recollect them more than you forget them Ever since you met them You lost your reflection Sense of direction then blame my Skin complexion Why stretch the truth to fit a lie? Now I'm deaf and you're blind In your sight and your mind I'll make this easy. Leave me If you dont believe me Id rather see you be free Than decieve me to please me. (fin)
This is one of the best lyrical poems I've ever read man. Real talk mad props on this.
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Wisdom_Tree replied on 06-06-2005 02:45PM [Reply]
Sed_Ated wrote:
BigDaddy Tres wrote:
I see through your need to Want me to bleed too Equally, we're see-through Equally, we need truth But you can't hear, and I can't speak What you can't learn and I can't teach Cuz I can't preach... Other lips lies packed my bags, you beseech: You left them? No, you let them... You recollect them more than you forget them Ever since you met them You lost your reflection Sense of direction then blame my Skin complexion Why stretch the truth to fit a lie? Now I'm deaf and you're blind In your sight and your mind I'll make this easy. Leave me If you dont believe me Id rather see you be free Than decieve me to please me. (fin)
This is one of the best lyrical poems I've ever read man. Real talk mad props on this.
Oh, thanks bruh...
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