Damn!That was so deep. Thank you for taking your time and writing such a deep and thoughtful poem that represents black women in such a positive manner.
Holla back! 8) :cry: <-------That was so beautiful!
I think that was soooo beautiful!!! Thanks for such uplifting words and for noting the positive things in and about black women. Only a beautiful mind could come up with such insipiring words and such a beautiful mind will go a long way. Once again let me tell you how much I love that. Keep ya head up and keep all those things you've said in mind for the future.
Chocolatetai411
i saw my name in it and got all hype!!!! ....til i realized it wasn't for me :? it was a great poem. showed depth n insight. u should start posting up on poetry forums. try www.allcityhiphop.com
That was so beautiful. I read like 3 times as if it was written just for me. Maybe someday I'll meet someone so deep and insightful. Keep doing ya thing!
I WOULD CALL HER
There's divinity in every move she makes.
Life in every breath she takes.
I'd call her Jehovah,
but then...
Who would I praise for blessing me.
I have come to realize their are some nice males in the world, and you fit the profile. All I can say thank you for being the person: kind, deep, and charming.
I gathered this from your words.