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Be Strong Posted on 07-26-2004
darnell

I wrote this because im tired of my beautufil black women giving up My sister don't give up because you are pregnant Don't give in cuz he left you Don't quit because he took your virginity and left you the next day Don't get down because society says we're not cut out for the career field If anything have some faith and push on Prove to yourself that you can be somebody inspite of what anyone else says Don't turn cold because he cheated on you Don't turn cold because he told you lies Don't turn cold because he doesn't want you anymore because he's bored If anything take it as a stepping stone and walk on with yourself and God Cuz he will replace that vessel with one that appreciates everything about you Why my sister you say should you listen to the words I say? Because I have seen all those things I just wrote But with God's help you'll get stronger So my black sistas stay strong!
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replied on 07-27-2004 11:20PM [Reply]
i usually like your style..but not this time. sorry darnell. but then again...im not one to really analyze poems and all that. im pretty "surface minded" if that makes sense. and plus...i think you are thinking too much into the situation wit u and ol girl...i aint gon put u out all like dat..but u know what i mean.
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