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You were on Stage - A poem about a poet Posted on 12-14-2004
Wisdom_Tree

You could tell it was her first time The way that she rhymed, ended each line Bendin' the vibe on the black divide I knew why she cried. Cuz she died inside with each breath Bringing back to life emotions that need rest She's blessed, but shed rather take a recess Being a poet, she didnt know that there would be stress She guessed, but now her surety failed her As if the words mutiny and scrutiny ailed her Paled, her loss of breath made me hail her Distorted laughs alongst the feelings that assailed her And then, With no notes, she sang' what she wrote, Hook, line, and sink her, boomeranged what she hoped Letters sent to JAIL and convicted, I took notes Looked in my direction, my reflection on her nose Those who heard through the applause heard her speach To a boy she didnt know, but gave her somethin' to preach "Whats your name" she mouthed, clouded, she beseeched I never told her; Nameless souls are always best to teach.
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Wisdom_Tree replied on 12-18-2004 06:12PM [Reply]
*PURE*Kindnezz wrote:
I'm feeling it "Big Daddy" :wink: :lol: "With no notes, she sang' what she wrote, Hook, line, and sink her, boomeranged what she hoped Letters sent to JAIL and convicted, I took notes" that's my part right there
Oh, you got jokes...
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Blutifully Human replied on 12-18-2004 09:58PM [Reply]
i wasn't joking Big Daddy :wink:
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Wisdom_Tree replied on 12-19-2004 12:34AM [Reply]
*PURE*Kindnezz wrote:
i wasn't joking Big Daddy :wink:
Yup, youre enjoying that a bit much. *polishes your halo* Dont wanna stain that....
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replied on 12-19-2004 03:20PM [Reply]
::walks in, throws a grape at tres, and bouncez:: WASNT ME!!
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Wisdom_Tree replied on 12-19-2004 06:21PM [Reply]
MonkeyBone wrote:
::walks in, throws a grape at tres, and bouncez:: WASNT ME!!
*dodges* youre steady throwin fruit...
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replied on 12-20-2004 01:15AM [Reply]
BigDaddy Tres wrote:
MonkeyBone wrote:
::walks in, throws a grape at tres, and bouncez:: WASNT ME!!
*dodges* youre steady throwin fruit...
^^Could throw something else...But gotta keep it G-rated :twisted: ::calls kenya to go halo shoppin wit me while we're home::
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Blutifully Human replied on 12-20-2004 04:39AM [Reply]
u shoulda aimed the grape at his tongue. I bet u wouldn't have missed :lol: And what else u ova there talkin about "throwin"? Gal, don't make me get my belt! Yeah...we might need to go halo shoppin for u missy. Maybe even for me too...mine is gettin a lil dull...it's still there tho ! Aint that right Tres?
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~*Secret*~ replied on 12-20-2004 05:00PM [Reply]
Ma_So_Serious wrote:
stayin' up all night wondering when she gone come home/feelin' like you been left in a world all on your own/she's got this sickness in her and you cant figure it out/how she got so addicted, and how this came about/when she started this habit you were just so long/so it was hard for you to understand how far she was strung/but as you get older, you get used to being a motherless child/on the inside your torn, while outiside you wear a fake smile/you got family here and there but no one seems to understand/after 17 yrs your father understands its time for him to be a man/so you keep going, moving on with your life/and you keep telling yourself that you can do this if you try with all your might/you've been on this journey going mile after mile/but finally you realize your nothing but another "broken child"
that was tight
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~*Secret*~ replied on 12-20-2004 05:01PM [Reply]
BigDaddy Tres wrote:
You could tell it was her first time The way that she rhymed, ended each line Bendin' the vibe on the black divide I knew why she cried. Cuz she died inside with each breath Bringing back to life emotions that need rest She's blessed, but shed rather take a recess Being a poet, she didnt know that there would be stress She guessed, but now her surety failed her As if the words mutiny and scrutiny ailed her Paled, her loss of breath made me hail her Distorted laughs alongst the feelings that assailed her And then, With no notes, she sang' what she wrote, Hook, line, and sink her, boomeranged what she hoped Letters sent to JAIL and convicted, I took notes Looked in my direction, my reflection on her nose Those who heard through the applause heard her speach To a boy she didnt know, but gave her somethin' to preach "Whats your name" she mouthed, clouded, she beseeched I never told her; Nameless souls are always best to teach.
bows to the master once again...how do u do it?
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Wisdom_Tree replied on 12-20-2004 08:03PM [Reply]
~*Secret*~ wrote:
BigDaddy Tres wrote:
You could tell it was her first time The way that she rhymed, ended each line Bendin' the vibe on the black divide I knew why she cried. Cuz she died inside with each breath Bringing back to life emotions that need rest She's blessed, but shed rather take a recess Being a poet, she didnt know that there would be stress She guessed, but now her surety failed her As if the words mutiny and scrutiny ailed her Paled, her loss of breath made me hail her Distorted laughs alongst the feelings that assailed her And then, With no notes, she sang' what she wrote, Hook, line, and sink her, boomeranged what she hoped Letters sent to JAIL and convicted, I took notes Looked in my direction, my reflection on her nose Those who heard through the applause heard her speach To a boy she didnt know, but gave her somethin' to preach "Whats your name" she mouthed, clouded, she beseeched I never told her; Nameless souls are always best to teach.
bows to the master once again...how do u do it?
If you live in the south long enough some things just come naturally...like booties n rhymin... Oh, and Kenya...yeah, your halo needs a tune up but youre aight.
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