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Words... Posted on 05-13-2004
Riley

Don't know wether to call it a rap, poetry or just words on paper but this is somethin' i wrote awhile ago before i decided to go back to school... I could have blamed my father, But I knew I was failing myself Cuz only thing i was into was sellin' the melt couldn't talk to nobody, about the the hell that i felt so i walked with a .38 and extra shells by my belt I had click...If u crossed them, you crossed us then they crossed me so i lost friends and lost trust almost got robbed, reached for the gun and he bust I got grazed...so i cocked back and he got shot in the leg My whole life growing up, i knew alot for my age I stopped dukin' it out and became accustomed to shootouts Couldn't live by rules, so i left mom dukes house never meant to hurt her, but i just had to let the truth out I ran the streets wild, seemed like they had adopted me i fvcked up my flip money, i was playin' the game sloppily got back on top and older females started jockin' me the sooner i got my weight up, the more they felt like lockin' me but a couple months I got free, Bettered my knowledge position started putting the drug money towards my college tuition conversated with god and got more involved in religion
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replied on 05-15-2004 04:07PM [Reply]
Tanochi Tres wrote:
ChoklatPoet wrote:
Riley Freeman wrote:
Don't know wether to call it a rap, poetry or just words on paper but this is somethin' i wrote awhile ago before i decided to go back to school... I could have blamed my father, But I knew I was failing myself Cuz only thing i was into was sellin' the melt couldn't talk to nobody, about the the hell that i felt so i walked with a .38 and extra shells by my belt I had click...If u crossed them, you crossed us then they crossed me so i lost friends and lost trust almost got robbed, reached for the gun and he bust I got grazed...so i cocked back and he got shot in the leg My whole life growing up, i knew alot for my age I stopped dukin' it out and became accustomed to shootouts Couldn't live by rules, so i left mom dukes house never meant to hurt her, but i just had to let the truth out I ran the streets wild, seemed like they had adopted me i fvcked up my flip money, i was playin' the game sloppily got back on top and older females started jockin' me the sooner i got my weight up, the more they felt like lockin' me but a couple months I got free, Bettered my knowledge position started putting the drug money towards my college tuition conversated with god and got more involved in religion
Will you be my husband lol
Oh REALLY Tya? *leaves, shakin his head*
.. Gosh man .. It was just a joke .. Besides he said no anyway :?
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replied on 05-15-2004 04:08PM [Reply]
Tanochi Tres wrote:
ChoklatPoet wrote:
Riley Freeman wrote:
Don't know wether to call it a rap, poetry or just words on paper but this is somethin' i wrote awhile ago before i decided to go back to school... I could have blamed my father, But I knew I was failing myself Cuz only thing i was into was sellin' the melt couldn't talk to nobody, about the the hell that i felt so i walked with a .38 and extra shells by my belt I had click...If u crossed them, you crossed us then they crossed me so i lost friends and lost trust almost got robbed, reached for the gun and he bust I got grazed...so i cocked back and he got shot in the leg My whole life growing up, i knew alot for my age I stopped dukin' it out and became accustomed to shootouts Couldn't live by rules, so i left mom dukes house never meant to hurt her, but i just had to let the truth out I ran the streets wild, seemed like they had adopted me i fvcked up my flip money, i was playin' the game sloppily got back on top and older females started jockin' me the sooner i got my weight up, the more they felt like lockin' me but a couple months I got free, Bettered my knowledge position started putting the drug money towards my college tuition conversated with god and got more involved in religion
Will you be my husband lol
Oh REALLY Tya? *leaves, shakin his head*
.. Gosh man .. It was just a joke .. Besides he said no anyway :?
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blaquezilla replied on 05-17-2004 06:52PM [Reply]
i would sware we brothers, only form a different mother, cause i was livin in the gutter, just like you, I hustled too, i know you know how the city do, cops dont care, my moms was scared, my brothers now that life for black men aint fair, say yall keep on excellin, me and this brother both stopped sellin and were god will take us....there is no tellin
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oOoDazzlingDanceroOo replied on 05-19-2004 02:08AM [Reply]
A luv of my own wrote:
I'm feelin u.
cosigns
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replied on 05-20-2004 04:49PM [Reply]
that was some hot sh*t
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replied on 06-20-2004 10:30PM [Reply]
ChoklatPoet wrote:
Riley Freeman wrote:
Don't know wether to call it a rap, poetry or just words on paper but this is somethin' i wrote awhile ago before i decided to go back to school... I could have blamed my father, But I knew I was failing myself Cuz only thing i was into was sellin' the melt couldn't talk to nobody, about the the hell that i felt so i walked with a .38 and extra shells by my belt I had click...If u crossed them, you crossed us then they crossed me so i lost friends and lost trust almost got robbed, reached for the gun and he bust I got grazed...so i cocked back and he got shot in the leg My whole life growing up, i knew alot for my age I stopped dukin' it out and became accustomed to shootouts Couldn't live by rules, so i left mom dukes house never meant to hurt her, but i just had to let the truth out I ran the streets wild, seemed like they had adopted me i fvcked up my flip money, i was playin' the game sloppily got back on top and older females started jockin' me the sooner i got my weight up, the more they felt like lockin' me but a couple months I got free, Bettered my knowledge position started putting the drug money towards my college tuition conversated with god and got more involved in religion
Man this Sh*t is the Sh*t I had to come back and read it again .. Now I saiiiiiiiiiid will .. u be my husband!
Man this gives me chills up my spine plus inspiration .. I gotta bring it back to the top
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chocolatetai411 replied on 07-30-2004 04:10PM [Reply]
I know that I'm late reading this, but that was so beautiful. I'm feelin' that and I can relate to a lot that you wrote. Chocolatetai411
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