Young Boy...(A Story bouta boy from da Hood)

4 replies · 2717 views · Started by Ma_So_Serious · Dec 2004
He could have been anything in the world he could have grown into a man with a beautiful babygirl buh instead he chose and went down the wrong road its like he was walkin backwards, with his eyes closed at first he started out sooo good first **** n college from his hood but he got caught up n all those gangs and **** he had really changed so quick, when he was young he was silent his mother never thought that he would be the one to walk around with both his hands placed on a gun Never thought that he would get locked up never thought that every girl he met he'd knock up she never thought she'd be picking out out his casket his mother never dreamed she'd live to see her son in this basket its really not his fault that he died he didnt know what else to do but commit **** he tried to leave the gang but they wouldnt let him out i guess he didnt know what gangs were all about R.I.P Jayuan Montgomery Projects.......
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Wisdom_Tree · Dec 2004
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*Nods* a poem to be observed indeed.
Blutifully Human · Dec 2004
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that was on point. I liked how the sequence was well put together and how the flow was on point. U ended it well. That was hot
· Dec 2004
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thanx....idk...i wrote it after my boyfriends best friend died....
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