From Inhale to Exhale

Just something I wrote during a decision time in my life...tell me what u think...and before u read it....GET UR MIND OUT THE GUTTA! :roll: From Inhale to Exhale From sad to happy From pain to pleasure From hate to love From inhale to exhale I feel you inside of me Taking our love to the innermost degree Your love ubiquitous, sets me free From inhale to exhale I search myself for your love As you take me higher above Higher heights, deeper depths From inhale to exhale An inner tranquility I’ve never felt before Because I know what else is in store From inhale to exhale I know where you’re taking me I know where we’ll go Ecstasy’s next echelon; pain is below From inhale to exhale I’m dripping and hot and your love is the key You pull me in closer I feel you against me From inhale to exhale The passion is there I feel it in you Wanting it to be in me too From inhale to exhale You’re trying to let me experience what you feel I want it so badly because I’ve discerned that it’s real Satisfying my hunger, like a long awaited repast From inhale o exhale I want it bad enough And now I’ll get it But in giving it to me, you get all the credit From inhale to exhale I felt your being coming through my body Thrusting me into an utter silence and oblivion And now what started as pain is pleasure From inhale to exhale I’ve gotten what I desired You’ve quenched my thirst I didn’t come in second, we both came in first From inhale to exhale This emotion that I felt Was in beat with my life And it will forever be that way From inhale to exhale No other way to thank you for your gift of satisfaction But by making the next time; a chain reaction Starting with me and ending with you From inhale to exhale Our quest for satiating what we needed is now over And I can’t ever arise to try to reflect How you came into my being and ceased my neglect From inhale to exhale From inhale to exhale you’ve blown my mind And now I’m caught in a rapture so sublime That all I can do is think of you and all you’ve done to me From inhale to exhale

i already said i wasfeeling it, but i'll say it again. and i wish you had've told me to get my mind out the gutter before i read it. i had to read it again with an innocent eye :lol:

^^ yeah me too lol ::snaps fingers:: Very good write girl...

very nice

Nice poem

thanks for the comments...................... I've kinda experienced the poem now, and it means so much more to me...................

*nods* Absolutely. :arrow: