forget about a love poem...this is real

5 replies · 4225 views · Started by I'm So St. Louis · Oct 2004
This is Real I wanted to write a real love poem not one full of bullshyt with whimsical phrases in a melancholy cadence a real love poem using words like sacrifice and fear, empty, fulfilling, lasting, lusting ,needing disregarding and fleeting you know, all those things that real love can be because you can feel empty and alone when your baby aint home or be filled by lust disregarding the trust pleading for one more moment or dying to be set free from your loves un\pleasantries real love is deep tangled emotions equal parts of danger and devotion wrapped in multi-color roses that hide thorns love is beautiful natural, factual fantasies love is the lies you tell me the truth you feel love creates cries, sighs, spies and crimes babies, families, whether it lasted 60 seconds or 60 years it can be found in smiles and tears love is, all of the above unable to be categorized it’s favorite place to hide is the eyes, see this is a real love poem love is a beautiful **** true emotion that can be elusive if your careful and open it can rise like incense smoke through your grasp and leave you with a sweet smell you can’t wholly have it’s a windy path on a bumpy road paved with pillows and pot holes and if nothing else, it’s real so when you get it keep it
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prettypoet8804 · Oct 2004
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"paved with pillows and pot holes" that was my favorite line. i liked it cuz it wasn't hella like a soap opera type of love poem.
· Aug 2005
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yep this one too..uppin it so that you might enjoy
· Aug 2005
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:sad: :sad: :sad: :sad:
AfroPoeticSista · Sep 2005
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yea st. louis!
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