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Short expression of pain Posted on 03-19-2008

Lt.SkndHoney_01
sacramento, CA
If you read, please comment, that will make me very happy... Also this is my first thread post. The tears are consistant, like a cascading line of fire, With all of the emotions, shes vulnerable, and exposed are her deep desires, The mystique no longer remains, and etiquacy has long since past, Her dreams have ran away, and everything she lives for is proceeding fast, She gives up on hope, because without him the high will begin to descend, Its either him or her, and shes love smitten, so her future she gives to him, Closing the doors, of fascination, and the glamorous achievement, For him she gave her world, although he couldnt see it. [original piece from Mz. Honey [Miela] written Jan. 5 2008 at 1:05 am] [[Comment please]]
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WeRidenVA757 from Colorado Springs, CO replied on 03-19-2008 08:55PM [Reply]

Nice write, Lt. Honey. Keep up the good work, aiight?
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Lt.SkndHoney_01 from sacramento, CA replied on 03-19-2008 11:49PM [Reply]

WeRidenVA757 wrote:
Nice write, Lt. Honey. Keep up the good work, aiight?
I will, and thanks so much!!
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