Ladies...what you think???
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Jul 2004
blaque_babigurl_barbie
Choudrant, LA
Hey y'all my friend wrote this poem and i know there is a poetry thread but i just wanted to know what y'all thought about it and besides i can't post it cause it's not my poem!!!!
"A Good Man???"
You say you want a Good Man, and when it comes to finding one you won`t.
Because when if comes to really wanting one, ladies you don`t.
You say you want a Good Man, one that will always give you hugs.
But every time I turn around to embrace you,you`re always chasing after thugs.
You say you want a Good Man, well I`m here to tell you that`s not true.
Because the last one that came your way, wasn`t tall enough for you.
You say you want a Good Man, cause you`re tired of trifling mess.
But you rolled your eyes at the last one, simply because you didn`t like the way he dressed.
You say you want a Good Man, one that will have you for his wife.
Yet every time you come across one, you say he`s just too nice.
You say you want a Good Man, now I`m not saying you should make him beg.
But a brother should at least know your first and last name before you open up your legs.
See if you try that with a Good Man, in you he won`t be pleased.
For he realized, just like he could have,other brothers have had you with ease.
Now in order to get a Good Man, you need to listen -see it`s in your favor.
Starting with the fact that no Good Man wants a woman who curses like a sailor.
And in your quest to find a Good Man, listen as if It`s Law.
You`ll never find aGood Man, if you always label him as a dog.
See a Good Man wants a woman that expects to recieve his best.
But you will never ever find one, if you keep settling for less.
Now if you`ve found a Good Man, that you think might be right for you.
You`ll know if he`s not a Good Man, if he won`t go to church with you.
For in the life of a Good Man, you`re not first, but don`t take it
hard. Seeyou`re standing right there next to him, but you`re second after God.
So if you still would like a Good Man one that will make you a real good wife.
There`s only one thing left for you to do, and that`s simply become a Good Woman.
So what y'all think...true..false...???
Poody da Cutie wrote:I was wit u until that last line, it didn't rhyme :?
