Just something I wrote during a decision time in my life...tell me what u think...and before u read it....GET UR MIND OUT THE GUTTA! :roll:
From Inhale to Exhale
From sad to happy
From pain to pleasure
From hate to love
From inhale to exhale
I feel you inside of me
Taking our love to the innermost degree
Your love ubiquitous, sets me free
From inhale to exhale
I search myself for your love
As you take me higher above
Higher heights, deeper depths
From inhale to exhale
An inner tranquility
I’ve never felt before
Because I know what else is in store
From inhale to exhale
I know where you’re taking me
I know where we’ll go
Ecstasy’s next echelon; pain is below
From inhale to exhale
I’m dripping and hot and your love is the key
You pull me in closer
I feel you against me
From inhale to exhale
The passion is there
I feel it in you
Wanting it to be in me too
From inhale to exhale
You’re trying to let me experience what you feel
I want it so badly because I’ve discerned that it’s real
Satisfying my hunger, like a long awaited repast
From inhale o exhale
I want it bad enough
And now I’ll get it
But in giving it to me, you get all the credit
From inhale to exhale
I felt your being coming through my body
Thrusting me into an utter silence and oblivion
And now what started as pain is pleasure
From inhale to exhale
I’ve gotten what I desired
You’ve quenched my thirst
I didn’t come in second, we both came in first
From inhale to exhale
This emotion that I felt
Was in beat with my life
And it will forever be that way
From inhale to exhale
No other way to thank you for your gift of satisfaction
But by making the next time; a chain reaction
Starting with me and ending with you
From inhale to exhale
Our quest for satiating what we needed is now over
And I can’t ever arise to try to reflect
How you came into my being and ceased my neglect
From inhale to exhale
From inhale to exhale you’ve blown my mind
And now I’m caught in a rapture so sublime
That all I can do is think of you and all you’ve done to me
From inhale to exhale
you virgins NEVER cease 2 amaze me with your imaginations
gee, what's wrong with a lil imagination? Especially if it can be brought into existence :twisted:
btw...LOVELY poem Kisha *holds head down and snaps fingers*
Blaze, when I said what you and ya man expereinced was real, it was after I read both ya poems. My first time, I was under the illusion that I shared something special with my partner, but came to find I was only fooling myself. I'm glad to see that two people actually truly got it.
