You were on Stage - A poem about a poet

26 replies · 12624 views · Started by Wisdom_Tree · Dec 2004
Wisdom_Tree Texas City, TX
You could tell it was her first time The way that she rhymed, ended each line Bendin' the vibe on the black divide I knew why she cried. Cuz she died inside with each breath Bringing back to life emotions that need rest She's blessed, but shed rather take a recess Being a poet, she didnt know that there would be stress She guessed, but now her surety failed her As if the words mutiny and scrutiny ailed her Paled, her loss of breath made me hail her Distorted laughs alongst the feelings that assailed her And then, With no notes, she sang' what she wrote, Hook, line, and sink her, boomeranged what she hoped Letters sent to JAIL and convicted, I took notes Looked in my direction, my reflection on her nose Those who heard through the applause heard her speach To a boy she didnt know, but gave her somethin' to preach "Whats your name" she mouthed, clouded, she beseeched I never told her; Nameless souls are always best to teach.
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Blutifully Human · Dec 2004
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BigDaddy Tres wrote:
Oh, and Kenya...yeah, your halo needs a tune up but youre aight.
:evil:
Wisdom_Tree · Dec 2004
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*PURE*Kindnezz wrote:
BigDaddy Tres wrote:
Oh, and Kenya...yeah, your halo needs a tune up but youre aight.
:evil:
O_o fine fine, your halo is perfect, sheesh *throws his hands up and leaves* :arrow:
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· Dec 2004
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*PURE*Kindnezz wrote:
u shoulda aimed the grape at his tongue. I bet u wouldn't have missed :lol: And what else u ova there talkin about "throwin"?
Sometimes I throw candy... YO TRES...HOW DEM SKITTLEZ WORKIN OUT FOR YA, DOGG!?!?! :twisted: :lol: 8)
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Blutifully Human · Dec 2004
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BigDaddy Tres wrote:
*PURE*Kindnezz wrote:
BigDaddy Tres wrote:
Oh, and Kenya...yeah, your halo needs a tune up but youre aight.
:evil:
O_o fine fine, your halo is perfect, sheesh *throws his hands up and leaves* :arrow:
thank u sweety
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Poetic Realness · Dec 2004
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Nice to read a poem from you....This was a pretty nice drop, it flowed pretty well...these were my fav lines of the piece......
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Cuz she died inside with each breath Bringing back to life emotions that need rest
Men I thought those lines were a ****, the way you describe her words were on point. True art of poetry...
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Wisdom_Tree · Dec 2004
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Poetic Realness wrote:
Nice to read a poem from you....This was a pretty nice drop, it flowed pretty well...these were my fav lines of the piece......
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Cuz she died inside with each breath Bringing back to life emotions that need rest
Men I thought those lines were a ****, the way you describe her words were on point. True art of poetry...
I Please to Live. :arrow:
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