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My Own Untitled (thats the name of it) Posted on 05-21-2004
Wisdom_Tree
Texas City, TX
Its always something, Never nothing. She said shes heard this song before while I played the fool I was her tool, and she used me I lose my cool And I'm sorry Miss Jackson, but ya daughta gave me the Joneses Breakin ligaments, sentiments and my boneses But I saw it coming, didnt dodge the bullet It was coming for you Now you see who took it But I saw you running, didnt run to catch you Because youre happier now Can't be too mad at you I suppose as long as you smile...no, wait, I wont care Since I'll be dying inside each day youre never there Since I'll be crying inside each way, youll never bear This black **** youve carved in my soul to wear And I hate to love to hurt to love to hate you Its great to love, to hurt - Enough! - that makes two Never be my weakness, never hold my spirit And when I die and scream your name I hope that you dont f*cking hear it But I saw it coming, didnt dodge the bullet It was coming for you Now you see who took it But I saw you running, didnt run to catch you Because youre happier now Can't be too mad at you
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GaPeAcH replied on 05-22-2004 12:42AM [Reply]
i really enjoyed what u wrote.......it kinda reminds me of a relatioship gone wrong..........cant wait to read more
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replied on 05-22-2004 04:19PM [Reply]
This is beautiful. I can feel all the emotion. I'm sorry you're hurting.
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Wisdom_Tree from Texas City, TX replied on 05-22-2004 05:06PM [Reply]
A luv of my own wrote:
This is beautiful. I can feel all the emotion. I'm sorry you're hurting.
Yes well, women will do that to you, Wont they :arrow:
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lostsquishy replied on 05-23-2004 04:33PM [Reply]
Tanochi Tres wrote:
A luv of my own wrote:
This is beautiful. I can feel all the emotion. I'm sorry you're hurting.
Yes well, women will do that to you, Wont they :arrow:
FUCC DEM HOES!!!! :evil:
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Wisdom_Tree from Texas City, TX replied on 05-23-2004 04:44PM [Reply]
Ultra Squish wrote:
Tanochi Tres wrote:
A luv of my own wrote:
This is beautiful. I can feel all the emotion. I'm sorry you're hurting.
Yes well, women will do that to you, Wont they :arrow:
FUCC DEM HOES!!!! :evil:
LoL, I dont mess with hoes. Just respectable women. Well, I try to.
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lostsquishy replied on 05-23-2004 04:46PM [Reply]
Tanochi Tres wrote:
Ultra Squish wrote:
Tanochi Tres wrote:
A luv of my own wrote:
This is beautiful. I can feel all the emotion. I'm sorry you're hurting.
Yes well, women will do that to you, Wont they :arrow:
FUCC DEM HOES!!!! :evil:
LoL, I dont mess with hoes. Just respectable women. Well, I try to.
Riiighhht..... :? :arrow:
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replied on 05-23-2004 09:41PM [Reply]
Tanochi Tres wrote:
Its always something, Never nothing. She said shes heard this song before while I played the fool I was her tool, and she used me I lose my cool And I'm sorry Miss Jackson, but ya daughta gave me the Joneses Breakin ligaments, sentiments and my boneses But I saw it coming, didnt dodge the bullet It was coming for you Now you see who took it But I saw you running, didnt run to catch you Because youre happier now Can't be too mad at you I suppose as long as you smile...no, wait, I wont care Since I'll be dying inside each day youre never there Since I'll be crying inside each way, youll never bear This black **** youve carved in my soul to wear And I hate to love to hurt to love to hate you Its great to love, to hurt - Enough! - that makes two Never be my weakness, never hold my spirit And when I die and scream your name I hope that you dont f*cking hear it But I saw it coming, didnt dodge the bullet It was coming for you Now you see who took it But I saw you running, didnt run to catch you Because youre happier now Can't be too mad at you
Boi you got skillz
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AfroPoeticSista replied on 05-23-2004 09:54PM [Reply]
ohkay :roll: :roll: :roll: , is tht why u call yourself "a luv of my own"?
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