"How Do I..." By Brandy
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Started by N7pozishunz
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May 2004
Let's just say this one is very reflective of a current situation I'm in wit somebody.
Someone tell me please
How do I write about such a being
This man, this king, my everything
This dancer of spirited dances
Lover of lost romances
The king that is my everything
Such a being is this king
To make me think such a thing
To write in my journal
External and nocturnal
Up, up, and away our spirits fly
Away with the birds, so high in the sky
I pause to ask...How do I?
Someone tell me please
How do I love such a being?
Love such a king
This king, my everything
Dancer of spirited dances
Lover of lost romances
I love this king,
This king my everything
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i like that.
your not afraid to ask a powerful question that can be seen as a flaw in the eyes of few, but in the eyes of many as strenght. see the poem is tight and the one who is askin "how can I" seems strong because they are bold enough to ask for guidance. im feelin that.
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Anonymous wrote:i like that. your not afraid to ask a powerful question that can be seen as a flaw in the eyes of few, but in the eyes of many as strenght. see the poem is tight and the one who is askin "how can I" seems strong because they are bold enough to ask for guidance. im feelin that.

