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**TO AN ABSENTEE FATHER** Posted on 05-28-2004
AfroPoeticSista

I can see what you don't want others to know. I can tell that you cowardice is deep as drifted snow. You're low and about to screech your train Declare yourself insane retract you statement withdraw from the game. Feelin' lame, limpin on that broken crutch that's not ass sturdy as is once was because it'z been used too much like a phone cord after years of double-dutch? Running out of places to haven in,shield you from the wind, all four of which you created when you chose to walk out that door and leave me, at age four to weather the world, whether it hurled stones, burned, twirled........ ....Right now, I'm lookin' at my niece, sleeping, curled up under me. Even though my foot's asleep I don't wanna move 'CAUSE I'M NOT YOU.
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Soul D-Psi-ple replied on 05-28-2004 02:19PM [Reply]
that one hit close to home. i was most definitely feelin it.
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In Rod We Trust replied on 05-28-2004 06:17PM [Reply]
AfroPoeticSista wrote:
I can see what you don't want others to know. I can tell that you cowardice is deep as drifted snow. You're low and about to screech your train Declare yourself insane retract you statement withdraw from the game. Feelin' lame, limpin on that broken crutch that's not ass sturdy as is once was because it'z been used too much like a phone cord after years of double-dutch? Running out of places to haven in,shield you from the wind, all four of which you created when you chose to walk out that door and leave me, at age four to weather the world, whether it hurled stones, burned, twirled........ ....Right now, I'm lookin' at my niece, sleeping, curled up under me. Even though my foot's asleep I don't wanna move 'CAUSE I'M NOT YOU.
That was good. :cry:
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replied on 05-28-2004 06:30PM [Reply]
I'm really feeling you on this. Keep ya head up ma.
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In Rod We Trust replied on 05-28-2004 09:33PM [Reply]
Tori Im really feelin that poem. I can relate too.
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replied on 05-28-2004 09:58PM [Reply]
AfroPoeticSista wrote:
I can see what you don't want others to know. I can tell that you cowardice is deep as drifted snow. You're low and about to screech your train Declare yourself insane retract you statement withdraw from the game. Feelin' lame, limpin on that broken crutch that's not ass sturdy as is once was because it'z been used too much like a phone cord after years of double-dutch? Running out of places to haven in,shield you from the wind, all four of which you created when you chose to walk out that door and leave me, at age four to weather the world, whether it hurled stones, burned, twirled........ ....Right now, I'm lookin' at my niece, sleeping, curled up under me. Even though my foot's asleep I don't wanna move 'CAUSE I'M NOT YOU.
^^^That's my dogg, right there. Gurl u tha truth. You have a tru gift Tori. Do tha d a m n thang, gurl. PLATINUM CLUB BIOTCH!!!!!!!!!
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