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If Time is Money, and Money is Time... Posted on 05-28-2004
Soundcheck 1898

(incomplete... tell me what u think so far, its a spoken word joint so it might not flow right in ya head, so be creative) If Time is Money and money is Time if i'm dead broke does it mean my time has run out. I'm lacking in funds, forcing me to take the working mans route because now my money's funny causin me to question what life's REALLY about You See... I was once told that life is free but the cost of living in my hood causes me to disagree's YOU SEE!!!.... or rather hear it everytime u turn on u're radio and/or TV while you get brainwashed to think that your purpose in life is to live in luxury..... "Money Power Respect and eating right.... Money Power Respect what u need in life......" Will F! u ova... if u don't get u're priorities right They say money makes the world go round Therefore, as the world turns so must the wheels of economics so IN turn fiscal whips crack to produce bruised and bloody silverbacks I'm a slave to get paid yet my time and funds still subtract F! THAT!!! From the moment we're born the countdown begins to end and right now i'm counting 9 to 5 paycheck pimpin to survive I live to die... Is this really what life's about but how can this be if time supposedly is infinite how can i possibly run out... -FableOne aka MonkRenny Thoughts? (it needs some work)
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replied on 05-28-2004 11:40PM [Reply]
THATS WHATS UP I'm feelin this
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Soundcheck 1898 replied on 05-28-2004 11:55PM [Reply]
Preciate it... does it makes sense tho? Thats my main thing. Sometimes im' on some esoteric stuff and i don't realize it other people read it.
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replied on 05-29-2004 06:54PM [Reply]
As long as it makes sense to u; you're doing good. Trust that the right minds will get it. I sure as hell understood what u were talking about
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Wisdom_Tree replied on 05-29-2004 07:00PM [Reply]
It shows the true essence of the universe and how everything is in bunches of simple relationships, making one complex ratio of 2:1 and 1:2. Nicely put.
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blaquezilla replied on 05-29-2004 10:18PM [Reply]
I liked it but she said it needs work, i agree, but i still liked it
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Soundcheck 1898 replied on 06-04-2004 04:44PM [Reply]
trent wrote:
I liked it but she said it needs work, i agree, but i still liked it
lol who's she? and what do you think it needs work on?
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blaquezilla replied on 06-05-2004 03:36PM [Reply]
you are she, you said at the end and I quote
monkrenny wrote:
but how can this be if time supposedly is infinite how can i possibly run out... -FableOne aka MonkRenny Thoughts? (it needs some work)
i will pm you to tell you where you might wanna make adjustments, but it is good the way it is just to let you know. aight. besides cirtics are always out there and you cant please everyone, but just remeber that your spoken word is just that. YOUR SPOKEN WORD. but it's always good to be open to criticism. It will help you to get that next level all the time. one
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