(incomplete... tell me what u think so far, its a spoken word joint so it might not flow right in ya head, so be creative)
If Time is Money
and money is Time
if i'm **** broke does it mean my time has run out.
I'm lacking in funds, forcing me to take the working mans route
because now my money's funny causin me to question
what life's REALLY about
You See...
I was once told that life is free
but the cost of living in my hood
causes me to disagree's
YOU SEE!!!....
or rather hear it everytime u turn on
u're radio and/or TV
while you get brainwashed to think that your purpose in life
is to live in luxury.....
"Money Power Respect
and eating right....
Money Power Respect
what u need in life......"
Will F! u ova...
if u don't get u're priorities right
They say money makes the world go round
Therefore, as the world turns
so must the wheels of economics
so IN turn
fiscal whips crack
to produce bruised and bloody silverbacks
I'm a **** to get paid
yet my time and funds still subtract
F! THAT!!!
From the moment we're born
the countdown begins to end
and right now i'm counting 9 to 5
paycheck pimpin to survive
I live to die...
Is this really what life's about
but how can this be if time supposedly is infinite
how can i possibly run out...
-FableOne aka MonkRenny
Thoughts? (it needs some work)
It shows the true essence of the universe and how everything is in bunches of simple relationships, making one complex ratio of 2:1 and 1:2. Nicely put.
but how can this be if time supposedly is infinite
how can i possibly run out...
-FableOne aka MonkRenny
Thoughts? (it needs some work)
i will pm you to tell you where you might wanna make adjustments, but it is good the way it is just to let you know. aight. besides cirtics are always out there and you cant please everyone, but just remeber that your spoken word is just that. YOUR SPOKEN WORD. but it's always good to be open to criticism. It will help you to get that next level all the time. one
