If Time is Money, and Money is Time...

(incomplete... tell me what u think so far, its a spoken word joint so it might not flow right in ya head, so be creative) If Time is Money and money is Time if i'm **** broke does it mean my time has run out. I'm lacking in funds, forcing me to take the working mans route because now my money's funny causin me to question what life's REALLY about You See... I was once told that life is free but the cost of living in my hood causes me to disagree's YOU SEE!!!.... or rather hear it everytime u turn on u're radio and/or TV while you get brainwashed to think that your purpose in life is to live in luxury..... "Money Power Respect and eating right.... Money Power Respect what u need in life......" Will F! u ova... if u don't get u're priorities right They say money makes the world go round Therefore, as the world turns so must the wheels of economics so IN turn fiscal whips crack to produce bruised and bloody silverbacks I'm a **** to get paid yet my time and funds still subtract F! THAT!!! From the moment we're born the countdown begins to end and right now i'm counting 9 to 5 paycheck pimpin to survive I live to die... Is this really what life's about but how can this be if time supposedly is infinite how can i possibly run out... -FableOne aka MonkRenny Thoughts? (it needs some work)

THATS WHATS UP I'm feelin this

Preciate it... does it makes sense tho? Thats my main thing. Sometimes im' on some esoteric stuff and i don't realize it other people read it.

As long as it makes sense to u; you're doing good. Trust that the right minds will get it. I sure as hell understood what u were talking about

It shows the true essence of the universe and how everything is in bunches of simple relationships, making one complex ratio of 2:1 and 1:2. Nicely put.

I liked it but she said it needs work, i agree, but i still liked it