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My Latest piece: "Last Night" Posted on 05-23-2007

Traywick
Yorkville, IL
Last Night started off like any other and even though I knew I was feelin you and you was feelin me, it didn't really matter till around the third scene when I put my arm around you and you said you like it there and you put your head on my shoulder and i felt the brush of your hair and I couldn't help but wonder "Do friends do these kinds of things"? but I just brushed away the thought and I just kep on smiling. cuz even though friendship is good this is somehow better,like years from now I'll look at pictures and say "I could never forget her". But like bad stories, good movies must end and we walked out the theater as the epitome of friends. Got in the car and you pulled out a suprise and it mighta just been me but I saw something in your eyes. A portrait of you and me. Who wouldn't wanna be us? everytime we take a picture it looks like we're so in love. but I gave you hug and i pushed the whip and we laughed about the movie all the way to where you live. You said it way too early for you to go inside but it was nothing else to do it was a tuesday night. we just sat in the car and talked about life about how much different yours was from mine and I don't know what happened you can blame the moonlight but we leaned in and kissed and it felt so right so we did it again, and again, and a fourth time at that and then i did a couple of things that put an arch in your back and by the time we looked up it was two o'clock in the mornin and we know we wasn't finished, but I had to get home and plus I was kinda confused, if I tried I couldn't explain all I know is you held me tight and I couldn't complain so I walked you to the door and kissed you goodbye your lips still taste like choclate and you had that shine in your eye. we even didn't ask questions, no how's or why's. we just locked eyes and parted, and stated "till next time".
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