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A poem I wrote about/to this girl I was talking to Posted on 06-18-2007
venom3384
Main City, CA
See, I’m a get rich and lay out in hammocks Kicking it with girl who have that **** just So nice the pants she buy just stretch So she don’t wear jeans she rock denim spandex To get through all that **** I’ll consult the index And clean my specs like I was using windex I mean, she’s a dream just like an empress But she aint my girl yet so I’m a have to impress The fact of the matter that she got me so pressed That I’m a drop the ball like a full court press But I guess it was worth it just to see that blue dress Now I don’t wanna come off like a nuisance And I heard spitting game to you was useless But I don’t know what else to do girl, I’m clueless So I’m a try this cause my flow is ruthless And I been like you, but I thought you knew this What else should I do girl, I tried to prove this And if you say it’s just your ****, then girl you foolish Cause I like your smile especially when you try to frown And when you pretend that you’re mad everytime I’m around And when I compliment you, you blush and look down And you hyperventilate every time I go… Home By that I mean I've gone to your crib I've seen where you live You've seen how it's been kid And I cant take this whole week without you Man, I'm weak without you What is it about you that Has got me trippin like some young **** kid Some dumb **** kid And, I'm not sayin what I'm sayin is dumb I'm sayin the same thing I said from day 1 If my pockets stacked that fat If I had it like that And could carry the world on my back I would bye the planet Carry it right to your door Place it right on the floor And tell you it's yours Then laugh when you try to tell me to take it all back Like where I'ma put it? And if I could, I wouldnt Sides, I'm not leavin, where else would I go? I would follow you down the street just to see you walk and sneak into your classes just to hear you talk I love the thought of we being us So holla if you want something more than lust.
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replied on 07-04-2007 02:10PM [Reply]
This line is just too cute. "If my pockets stacked that fat If I had it like that And could carry the world on my back I would bye the planet Carry it right to your door Place it right on the floor And tell you it's yours Then laugh when you try to tell me to take it all back Like where I'ma put it? And if I could, I wouldnt Sides, I'm not leavin, where else would I go? I would follow you down the street just to see you walk and sneak into your classes just to hear you talk I love the thought of we being us So holla if you want something more than lust."
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sweet_honeybu from Riverside, CA replied on 07-04-2007 05:18PM [Reply]

so did u show this to the girl u were talking to?
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venom3384 from Main City, CA replied on 07-04-2007 06:19PM [Reply]
Yeah, I showed it to her. She liked it...or at least I think she did cause she started blushing and stuff. But, sadly, we no longer speak for other reasons. Or at least I hope it was other reasons and not the poem...
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sweet_honeybu from Riverside, CA replied on 07-04-2007 06:27PM [Reply]

well i know its not the poem cuz the poem is the business...well sorry to hear that yall dont speak anymore... this poem made me blush too and it wasnt even for me lol its that good...u meant it?
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venom3384 from Main City, CA replied on 07-05-2007 12:48AM [Reply]
Thanks, yeah, I definitely meant it.
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