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CLOUDY WATER Posted on 06-09-2004
The Big Girl Sweetz

Cloudy water I sat in a tub full of my salty tears... as i reminisced on our past years... Looking at soaked petals and cloudy water... remembering the smile you had at the altar... When you promised me your love and made me your wife... promised me your trust and faithfulness for the rest of my life. What ever made you think that i had stopped loving you? When you were the one who made my darks days sky blue. Nobody could hold me the way you did and make me feel like gold... You were my everything...weren't you told? You hurt me so bad that day i came home... to find you with her…**** on the floor... You said it was an accident…and that you thought she was me. Was that your excuse for just being plain greedy? Don't you remember how i cried for days... i didn't understand why you gave me all this pain. You said you needed a break from being in the marriage spotlight. You wanted to know how it felt to be with a different girl at night. i couldn't agree to what you were asking for... so, no...your place is with me…at home… You got angry and started screaming at me... saying you were not a **** and that you were free... you grabbed your coat and headed for the door. I wasn't gonna let you cheat on me anymore... I begged you not to leave... and pulled on your sleeve... and you turned around and simply hit me.... "OH HELL NO! I can't believe... that you had the audacity... to even touch me...." I picked up the glass vase and smashed it into your head... I didn't smash it hard...i wanted you alive not ****... I tied you up on the cold ground in the bathroom... By the time you woke up i was already through.... Now you wanted to apoligize... since you saw the fire in my eyes... i still loved you…after all you’re my man… But… if i can't have you…nobody can.... I took a sharp **** and **** you 6 times... screaming, "You are mine!....You are mine!" I sat in the tub full of salty tears... as i reminisced on our past years... And watched my tears cry out fast... and the cloudy water turned to black from the mascara on my eyelash... I dunked my head underneath the water... remembering the smile you had at the alter... I held my breath...for as long as i could... But i had to let go...let go of me...let go of you...
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replied on 06-10-2004 11:07AM [Reply]
And she looks soo innocent...
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BrownSugar replied on 06-10-2004 12:58PM [Reply]
backs away slowly . . . wanna talk about it Sweetie? Good poem though
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The Big Girl Sweetz replied on 06-10-2004 07:15PM [Reply]
^^^^****....like i've mentioned before...They call me sweetie for a reason...im the sweetest girl you'll ever meet...but the sweet can turn sour....****... j/p....it was just a story/poem...lol...in real life i would never do that...lol...however...nah...imma stop...lol
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Wisdom_Tree replied on 06-11-2004 10:48AM [Reply]
YESSSSS what a Lovely poem. :twisted:
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oOoDazzlingDanceroOo replied on 06-12-2004 10:51PM [Reply]
BrownSugar wrote:
backs away slowly . . . wanna talk about it Sweetie? Good poem though
LOL.cosigns
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