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My Ebony Queen Posted on 07-08-2004
darnell

I wrote this for a special woman who i had in my life but lost because some ignorant thing i said. I cant explain this feeling i feel of all the joy and excitement of a fantasy turned real like a chocolate coated morsel a tasty dream of delight she is my loving brown and my star in the night she has that look of an angel with her creamy dark skin thats so smooth to touch and gives warmth from within arosed by her presence she is my essence of love having her close to my heart is all i can think of she makes love with such passion that goes on thru the night that stirs my emotions til dawns early light and while she lays at my side she is a site to be seen for i know at this moment ive found MY EBONY QUEEN.
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replied on 07-08-2004 09:28PM [Reply]
Damn boy :!: I'm jealous of her. You shoulda just started to recite this poem to her. Even though it's not to me, it still makes me feel good because I know one day I'll be someone's EBONY QUEEN.
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replied on 07-08-2004 11:57PM [Reply]
aww thas real nice i likes
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replied on 07-10-2004 10:06PM [Reply]
yeah....too bad u messed up. real smooth...
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GaPeAcH replied on 07-10-2004 11:55PM [Reply]
if u read that poem to her bet she would rethink leaving cause i know i would have to think twice
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oOoDazzlingDanceroOo replied on 07-14-2004 07:03PM [Reply]
that was nice!
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ThatClassyGirl216 replied on 07-14-2004 10:48PM [Reply]
aww...too bad u lost her
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chocolatetai411 replied on 07-30-2004 03:54PM [Reply]
I love it. Just recite what you just wrote and be real with her you might open the door back up. I know I'd definitely give it a second thought. Chocolatetai411
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replied on 07-30-2004 04:33PM [Reply]
awww....thats was a sweet poem...it brought a smile to my face... YOU GO BOY :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Wisdom_Tree replied on 07-30-2004 07:29PM [Reply]
Oh yeah, you gotta take off ya watch... Cuz you already know what time it is 8) (shut up, i know im goofy)
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