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...................i just had to write Posted on 07-15-2004
Soul D-Psi-ple

HOT SH*T!!!... but i already know what u can do....good stuff.... i think i'mma collab with you later on in this thread, give me a minute to think... we should collab more often, it would be frickin' hot hot hot
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replied on 07-16-2004 09:49AM [Reply]
Psichotic Supa' Deuce wrote:
I dont know what this is. you don't have to feel this. i dont expect you to. My life is so hectic that sometimes I'd like to forget it and end it/ I'm constantly dependin' on parents and friends and Sh*t only to realize only I have the power to direct it/ I wanna wreck Sh*t, but I stay calm hopin' things'll work out/ I did that Sh*t and look what happened, aint Sh*t good turn out/ It seems with every decision I make, fate takes it and creates another obstacle in my way/ Defacin' my plans an dreams/ I'll never make it to my goal it seems/ But, I'm a confused black male livin' in a wack society/Where as it's crime to be me, another wanted face on the tv screen/ Statistically won't make it past 23/ I'm 19 and have 4 more years 'til I meet my defeat/ However, they say I can be what I wanna be, but thats not the case/ They constantly try and suit me up with a briefcase, feedin me fake tastes with which I don't agree with everyday/ I can't receive what I want, whatever the situation/ I'm forever dealin' with problems that I find difficult to give delineation/ Its frustratin' to find someone with the patience to sit and hear my ventilations/ So, I just think to myself and retain it hopin' it'll refrain from comin' out/ I put on the fake face everyday and walk out the house as happy as can be, while inside my demons tear at me, hindering my ability to live peacefully.......
this just flows from Deuce's "rhyme" or whatever he'd like to call it, just a lil' spontaneous COLLABORATION: it starts with the last line of his rhyme... ...I put on the fake face evryday an walk out of the house as happy as can be, while inside my demons tear hindering myt ability to live peacefully... WELL........ i can look n2 the windows 2 your soul... i c that you still are n control of life's marathon, life's matters no- i won't find you... in the latter body of skin & bones, scattered, fallen to the streets and clatter. y? 'cuz you have a GOOD heart ...and a GOOD mind ......and a GOOD mental! Babe- live peaculy- i know you can b'cuz... what-a what-a what if another scathing rebuttal attempt to brain wahs is no longer subtle... and it is an open sin? desperation has set in lookin' lik we r about to win---and our independence, our defense... freedom's no longer in suspense. negro girls and boys who "the man" still employs are keepin up alotta noise tryna get uss off point, without success, cause we aren't gonna get back up in that joint, watch dogs, the clock done struck we're through even playing like we give a **** we're not lost nor color struck we're straight and our freedom cannot wait we're straight and our freedom canot wait there's nothing left 2 debate injustice's damned ghost is out here alking post but throughout the world, coast 2 coast all that matter is the real we've been made whole, so here's the deal it's our time to spin the wheel to be subjugated no more to move out into the fore go through liberation's door the last vestiges of resistance merely act as assistance and stand up as victors as we steadily go the distance moving swiftly past the constrictors fulfilling the predictions of the success predictors black man, live for tomorrow and not today prepare for the future look down that road of consequences and successes for as much of a hassle it was to get that tassle, black man, you rise and rest... on the back of this educated black woman who is also takin' the same damned test! HOLLA AT YO GIRL!!!
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Slim GoodyN757 replied on 08-01-2004 08:32PM [Reply]
Both of these poems were deep and well thought out, you two are really talented keep up the good work and to the guy, I feel what you are saying
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