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Untitled by ME....ms. Rosie *snap snap snap* ya fingers Posted on 07-27-2004
RosieKisses

I never had this feeling, I have so much pain inside. Can't seem to understand it, and it's so hard to hide. How could I be so foolish? How could I run away? Why did i get so scared, and not listen to what they had to say? I saw my life flash before my eyes, would my freedom end like this? How fast a child could be created, By one single kiss. Will I regret for the rest of my life? Or will I just brush it off? Can I seriously answer these questions, cause I'll never hear my baby cough. I felt as if a piece of me died that day, How dumb on my part. If I could control my past, I'd rewind or press restart. I was so selfish and only thought of myself, I hurt all those around me, and even hurt my own health. If I could bring back the baby that I let go, my heart wouldnt hurt as much, and my child would know love, the way that i know.... ok after reading the last few lines over and over and over and over and over..im not too sure if it's right...but oh well :?
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Soundcheck 1898 replied on 07-27-2004 03:31PM [Reply]
Rosie you already know what i think so i'll just put this as my response :cry: :arrow: btw its not about how u write it down or how it sounds. As long as u're heart is in the right place its all good.
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replied on 07-27-2004 11:28PM [Reply]
Rosie, you had an abortion? :cry:
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replied on 07-28-2004 08:49AM [Reply]
Rosie....thats was beautiful.... Its perfect don't change a thing I'm sorry for you loss You're in my prayers
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RosieKisses replied on 07-28-2004 01:39PM [Reply]
thanks and ............................................................... :|
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replied on 07-28-2004 09:17PM [Reply]
Rosie, I know we bullshyt around all the time, but that poem is tight. :cry: :cry: :cry:
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RosieKisses replied on 07-29-2004 02:24PM [Reply]
JeremiahXXXVI wrote:
Rosie, I know we bullshyt around all the time, but that poem is tight. :cry: :cry: :cry:
thank ya
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replied on 07-30-2004 10:37PM [Reply]
8) i like it
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MikeCheck replied on 07-31-2004 04:40AM [Reply]
damn rosie that was deep......
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Neka18 replied on 08-01-2004 12:24AM [Reply]
I liked your poem. It was kind of sad but it was deep - it made you think. I think you achieved your goal and expressed how you felt beautifully. two thumbs up!!
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