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forget about a love poem...this is real Posted on 10-31-2004
I'm So St. Louis

This is Real I wanted to write a real love poem not one full of bullshyt with whimsical phrases in a melancholy cadence a real love poem using words like sacrifice and fear, empty, fulfilling, lasting, lusting ,needing disregarding and fleeting you know, all those things that real love can be because you can feel empty and alone when your baby aint home or be filled by lust disregarding the trust pleading for one more moment or dying to be set free from your loves un\pleasantries real love is deep tangled emotions equal parts of danger and devotion wrapped in multi-color roses that hide thorns love is beautiful natural, factual fantasies love is the lies you tell me the truth you feel love creates cries, sighs, spies and crimes babies, families, whether it lasted 60 seconds or 60 years it can be found in smiles and tears love is, all of the above unable to be categorized itís favorite place to hide is the eyes, see this is a real love poem love is a beautiful ugly true emotion that can be elusive if your careful and open it can rise like incense smoke through your grasp and leave you with a sweet smell you canít wholly have itís a windy path on a bumpy road paved with pillows and pot holes and if nothing else, itís real so when you get it keep it
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prettypoet8804 replied on 10-31-2004 10:46PM [Reply]
"paved with pillows and pot holes" that was my favorite line. i liked it cuz it wasn't hella like a soap opera type of love poem.
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replied on 08-25-2005 03:33PM [Reply]
yep this one too..uppin it so that you might enjoy
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replied on 08-25-2005 07:57PM [Reply]
:sad: :sad: :sad: :sad:
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AfroPoeticSista replied on 09-27-2005 12:32AM [Reply]
yea st. louis!
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