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guess it's my turn Posted on 10-31-2004
prettypoet8804

i figured i had been on here long enough with the name "prettypoet". it's time for me to put up or shut up. this piece is still super rough but tell me what you think. her diet started off innocently enough yogurt instead of a donut for breakfast salad at lunch good things for dinner like carrots potatoes and baked fish food that would make her small enough for his attention he ignored her still soon it was half a yogurt no lunch soup or salad for dinner she vowed to be his homecoming queen deserving of roses and small bears holding hearts her friends wanted to know why she wouldn't go have pizza with them they wanted to know why her skin stretched tight across her face and she fit her younger sister's jeans she never said she never told anyone when she started skipping breakfast altogether only nibbling at lunch to avoid being questioned eating dinner only if her mother was home he took notice long enough to say "what happened? i used to admire how you weren't pencil thin" he said this before leaving her standing dying it was too late now the way she had been was better appreciated than the way she had assumed he wanted her to be here's a real short one she thought of stars whenever he kissed her chocolate stars scattered across a caramel sky and with each gentle pressing of his lips onto her spine, she shivered and felt stars winking honest opinions, por favor
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In Rod We Trust replied on 11-01-2004 09:33AM [Reply]
damn that frst one had me in tears i know someone who was like this and it hurts to this day..............
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prettypoet8804 replied on 11-05-2004 07:09PM [Reply]
thanks for responding. i hope you still writing.
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Wisdom_Tree replied on 11-06-2004 10:00AM [Reply]
Misperception always makes for a great topic. *gives you the nod*
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