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Young Boy...(A Story bouta boy from da Hood) Posted on 12-22-2004
Ma_So_Serious

He could have been anything in the world he could have grown into a man with a beautiful babygirl buh instead he chose and went down the wrong road its like he was walkin backwards, with his eyes closed at first he started out sooo good first **** n college from his hood but he got caught up n all those gangs and **** he had really changed so quick, when he was young he was silent his mother never thought that he would be the one to walk around with both his hands placed on a gun Never thought that he would get locked up never thought that every girl he met he'd knock up she never thought she'd be picking out out his casket his mother never dreamed she'd live to see her son in this basket its really not his fault that he died he didnt know what else to do but commit **** he tried to leave the gang but they wouldnt let him out i guess he didnt know what gangs were all about R.I.P Jayuan Montgomery Projects.......
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Wisdom_Tree from Texas City, TX replied on 12-22-2004 10:35PM [Reply]
*Nods* a poem to be observed indeed.
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Blutifully Human from Washington, DC replied on 12-22-2004 11:00PM [Reply]

that was on point. I liked how the sequence was well put together and how the flow was on point. U ended it well. That was hot
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replied on 12-23-2004 09:57PM [Reply]
thanx....idk...i wrote it after my boyfriends best friend died....
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