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Watery Morning (Purposeless) Posted on 12-24-2004
Wisdom_Tree

Three in the morning, REM sleep, dead heat Of the night, weeps right outside leaked Through the window, past the door He didnt get up from his slumber till after 4 For once he awoke a mess, angry and aggrivated Aggitated from this ass who actually had to make this Stormy night the worst. He rehearsed a curse Then surprised himself, because the first Thing he saw, a raw body clad in a black dress Black woman with black dreds, more than half stressed He gave her access, she laid and rained her own Cheeks, like cloudy black peaks of sweet moons, grown From African flowers, she soured her face then made it plain Made a vain attempt to hide pain, "I hate the rain" He laughed at her disdain, gave her a towel and clothes An hour had closed and she rose out the shower, exposed To heat for the first time in her natural life. Looked like a queen and a natural wife. Water dripped from the ends of strands Of twisted brown hair in bands, like brown sugar sands Drowned in the sun, she smiled, this brown skinned one Named Naomi of Nigeria, beauty like none Else, she gave thanks on that watery morning Evening of pouring, that interrupted an evening of snoring "What are you doing here, its late, wet..." he noted She quoted him, "Come when you need me. You wrote it On a Post-It, and I kept it close to me." She sat next to Vincent Glissened, while her tragedy unfolded as he listened. "Isnt that strange. You can stay, lay in my place My bedroom is the door on the right, take my space." She faced him, aimed for his lips missed and hit his cheek "I cant give you what you want, and I know this is weak But I love her, no other, and youre further than the farthest Id offer you my heart, but shes already got me, Im heartless To you." She boohooed and he held her. And wished he hadnt. Cuz now blood rushed from his chest. Yes, she stabbed him And he felt himself happily happen to hurt, laughing "You killed my happiness first, its really a sad thing." "Shes been dead for a week now, how abrupt...Ill light the ether How quaint that you would kill Me. I've been dying to see her."
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The Big Girl Sweetz replied on 12-24-2004 11:20PM [Reply]
Wow Tres.....you are certainly awesome you know that?? Brilliant Writer....Brilliant... The imagery...is...just...beautiful.... man...Stay Sweet...Stay beautiful...Stay You.... You Are the prototype
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Wisdom_Tree replied on 12-25-2004 12:47AM [Reply]
Sweet Lee Kelley wrote:
Wow Tres.....you are certainly awesome you know that?? Brilliant Writer....Brilliant... The imagery...is...just...beautiful.... man...Stay Sweet...Stay beautiful...Stay You.... You Are the prototype
*laughs* I wanted to wrap it up - it was becoming too much of a story.
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Blutifully Human replied on 12-25-2004 01:16AM [Reply]
BigDaddy Tres wrote:
Sweet Lee Kelley wrote:
Wow Tres.....you are certainly awesome you know that?? Brilliant Writer....Brilliant... The imagery...is...just...beautiful.... man...Stay Sweet...Stay beautiful...Stay You.... You Are the prototype
it was becoming too much of a story.
that's what made it so good tho
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replied on 12-25-2004 02:15AM [Reply]
that was...was....w0w...
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Of twisted brown hair in bands, like brown sugar sands
words can't describe your way with words...
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replied on 12-26-2004 12:53AM [Reply]
::throws a dollar on stage:: Hey, at least I threw money instead of food :lol: That was beautiful Tres. ::snaps:: 8)
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~*Secret*~ replied on 01-02-2005 01:55AM [Reply]
*PURE*Kindnezz wrote:
BigDaddy Tres wrote:
Sweet Lee Kelley wrote:
Wow Tres.....you are certainly awesome you know that?? Brilliant Writer....Brilliant... The imagery...is...just...beautiful.... man...Stay Sweet...Stay beautiful...Stay You.... You Are the prototype
it was becoming too much of a story.
that's what made it so good tho
cosigns
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