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Rap and Rhapsody from a Broken Lover Posted on 01-18-2005
Wisdom_Tree

This is what I created A love ironic, but I cant make it Make you see or feel it, just know that, like this, theres no other Captured piece, rap and rhapsody, from a broken lover Began so fresh and novelty was not of mind or matter Cuz we were above those problems, see, enough time to chatter Catch her smile and laughter, but I quickly felt the drop Bending willow in the wind, I smelt' the scythe for the crop My life had to stop with the beat of the center Chest to explode, I let go and let pain enter My life had to stop with the beat of the center Chest to explode, I let go and let pain enter I remember thinking you didnt love me I remember drinking; you didnt love me I remember crying; I cuss then I bleed I remember dying...I m just so naive But this is what I created A love ironic, but I cant make it Make you see or feel it, justknow that, like this, theres no other Captured piece, rap and rhapsody, from a broken lover Any epilogue to this story'd be an epitaph Of anger and regret, upset for the unwritten past Broken lovers are so foolish, they believe to all dissent Rage against all who wish harm...to be left a denizen Of a fruitless land, salted soil without water or light All their might seals them further in a tomb of the night Of a fruitless land, salted soil without water or light All their might seals them further in a tomb of the night So I stop the struggle, from heart to paper But I cant stop lovin you, from heart to paper So I clear the smoke, light another description But I nearly choke while I fight this lovers prediction That this is what I created A love ironic, but I cant make it Make you see or feel it, just know that, like this, theres no other Captured piece, rap and rhapsody, from a broken lover.
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replied on 01-18-2005 08:07PM [Reply]
This young man be the truth y'all ::snapz:: 8)
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Princess LaRonda replied on 01-18-2005 08:46PM [Reply]
i love the repetition.......... and how this flows soooo smooth instead of like forced or something... definteily a good piece
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replied on 01-18-2005 09:24PM [Reply]
Nahd wrote:
i love the repetition.......... and how this flows soooo smooth instead of like forced or something... definteily a good piece
I liked that too...it gave it a song-like quality
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~*Secret*~ replied on 01-19-2005 02:02PM [Reply]
damn that boys good
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