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Alone Posted on 02-02-2005
JsGyrl1110

This is an original work and it begged to be heard so here it is Alone The need to be alone versus The need to overcome the solitude The isolation and the pain that comes with it Knowing that at this moment in time You are alone No one is there to hold or comfort you No one is there to make you smile and laugh No one is there to just fill the void That solitude brings Involuntary solitude Who doesn't yearn for that companionship? And feels the pain that the void brings When no one is there It is a sharp heart-piercing pain But it fades just like any other Slowly drifts off into oblivion Ever feel that the void mixes in With the feeling that you just don't really belong You never quite fit in Insider but outsider at the same time The void The pain Oblivion Life ~ *Miss Tee* ~
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Mountain of Molten Lust! replied on 02-02-2005 08:48PM [Reply]
This is nice. It speaks to me. This is very deep.
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GaPeAcH replied on 02-03-2005 05:31AM [Reply]
I was really feeling this, it kinda sums up whats goin on with me right now, im glad you posted it
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Wisdom_Tree replied on 02-03-2005 05:59PM [Reply]
*nods* muy interestante.
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JsGyrl1110 replied on 02-03-2005 11:19PM [Reply]
Thanks yall....sometimes you feel the need to write and it flows and then it feels the need to be expressed and thats what I did and I am glad that someone could identify with it it makes the words oh do much richer
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