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aznbabie's thoughtz Posted on 03-17-2005

PLAYAZ baby girl dont cry no more that playas gone away away to some other girl who he'll continue to play he uses ladies one by one ,plays them for their cashmoney and after that with them he'll be done this guy is jus no good swears that he's straight out tha hood and owns nothing but an S-T-D which is clearly jus puttin it nice-lee alwayz tryna look for a nut when really he jus need to be cut so baby girl dont worry he's beat dont bother bein caught up in his heat. (hope ya'll like this poem I wrote back in tha day...way back in tha day like 4 years ago jus want some feedback on my writin...till I psot tha real good ones!)
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ThatClassyGirl216 replied on 03-18-2005 02:42AM [Reply]
Thaz good...I'm feelin that... feel free to post some more of your poems up!
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replied on 03-18-2005 07:31AM [Reply]
Thanx sooo much..I was kinda nervous...but I'm good now..hahaha thanx!
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lykehoney from jessup, MD replied on 03-23-2005 08:30PM [Reply]

yay chica! you know i'm a fan of your poems PDT_001 You have no need to be nervous cuz your really good.keep doing what your doing. :smt109
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