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Last Wishes...deep story.....must read.... Posted on 05-29-2005
Haelo

Yo, I'm sittin in my bedroom, hands glued 2 my head, Gloc 9 to my left and bullets 2 my right on the bed, Pictures of u and me scattered all over the floor, Put 3 in the clip and I headed 4 the door, U the reason I'm stuck with this pain that I can no longer manage, U was a theif in the night, and u took me 4 granted, Damn I loved u, I gave u my soul u only wanted the money, I gave u the World and u treated me like a 3rd-World country, I'm driving on the beltway running red lights going 125, Empty bottles of Jin and Remi, glazed look in my eyes, Mind racing thinking about our luv and how u had 2 spoil it, How U put me thru more s*** than a muthaf***in toilet, Me coming home late from work and puttin the keys 2 the lock, Stopping hearing ur screams of pleasures and the bed rock, Stopped where I stood, keys dropped, face stuck in shock, Heart fell like flower petals from she luvs me 2 she luvs me not, The sound of u screaming his name drove me completely insane, Anger knocking at my brain, u couldn't imagine the pain, Now I pull up 2 the spot where I left my mind and my heart, And keys still around there somewhere, couldn't see in the dark, Bust the door down, I hear ur shouts coming from upstairs, Walked slowly 2 our special spot, how could u f*** him there, My hand tightens around the trigga as I quietly step in, U franticly fixin ur hair while trying 2 hide my best friend, Tryna offer an explaination but right now it's like talking 2 a wall, I raise the gun and put 1 in his head and watch him fall, U scream in horror as u look in my eyes and see nothingness now, Trying 2 reason with me, "Honey, put the gun down," Tears drop as I squeezed the trigga, eyes closed so I couldn't see, Heard ur body drop along with my soul, and the last bullet was for me, (gunshot) yo, check out my other joints I put up....Connections, No Pain no More, and My music...peace and luv always... I'm out...
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replied on 05-29-2005 06:11PM [Reply]
Man that was so good. Even thought it was violent, that ish really be happening. Thats why its not good to cheat. Be faithful. You get two thumbs up and a coke for that one. :-D I wanna read more
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mari_justus replied on 06-02-2005 08:52PM [Reply]
Oh... man... wow that sh** was crazy i'm still in awe i can't even post what's on my mind mad props
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replied on 06-03-2005 10:53PM [Reply]
that was WOW. Like her, I really don't know what to say. I give you ya props.
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oOoDazzlingDanceroOo replied on 06-05-2005 11:56PM [Reply]
LadyLibra07 wrote:
that was WOW. Like her, I really don't know what to say. I give you ya props.
Cosigns..Wow.
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lykehoney replied on 06-07-2005 03:43PM [Reply]
I was feelin this one. it was very real .. You can paint a picture as the poem goes along.. good job :grin:
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