girl... you know u got skills. I'm really diggin the concept and your point definitely comes across clearly.
Reading a poem is like taking a ride on somebodies train of thought. You have a starting point and a destination and this piece was definitely a smooth and scenic ride.
*walks off snapping fingers*
Forget yall...Fall 03 is where its at!!!(Thats when i crossed the band... )
But anyways, thats a good one Shari. Keep posting some more so we can award you the Pulitzer Prize one day..lol