But when the black stars pierce
And as the days grows so near
All while I dream and fear
Why wont you dissappear
The greatest loss and love
For what it costs, it ****
Now, more than often, Us
Seems like it always was
Are you thinking about (me) Cuz' Im thinking about (you)
"How you can't live without (me)" Cuz I cant live without (you)
If you want me you got (me) And there's nothing to stop (me)
You know I'm ready for (you) This love is ready for (two)
Of all the things conversed
We played the part, rehearsed
How it would be, if first
We met without this curse
I get so very weak
This man who should not weep
Knowing that when you sleep
Its with your man, not me
Are you thinking about (me) Cuz' Im thinking about (you)
"How you can't live without (me)" Cuz I cant live without (you)
If you want me you got (me) And there's nothing to stop (me)
You know I'm ready for (you) This love is ready for (two)
*applauds* I really like this. I would tell you how talented you are but you already know that. I think I may just print it out and later on in life this may be worth millions *giggles*
Keep on writing. Cause I'm definetly reading.
hold it down for the House man... alot of talented poets come out of there (e.g. Saul Williams). I've been trying to get out and recited stuff live but obvious reason this past semester I couldn't. I haven't really looked at this forum but i can tell i'll be spending a lot of time in here lol.
You chill with any Illyterati over there?
hold it down for the House man... alot of talented poets come out of there (e.g. Saul Williams). I've been trying to get out and recited stuff live but obvious reason this past semester I couldn't. I haven't really looked at this forum but i can tell i'll be spending a lot of time in here lol.
You chill with any Illyterati over there?
Only by way of my brother Marcus - hes the one that gets me out and makes sure that I actually go to the social functions.
i only recited a couple times in the AUC, one where i shaved my head and nobody knew cuz i wore a beenie, and then unveiled it in sync with the poem that i was reading from a book, then i threw the book down and recited the rest from memory all in sync....i thought it was tight, but i guess it was pretty random lol i wrote the poem like an hour before the event, but i had been dreaming about it for days....
Wow Tres...I started writing a poem about the same topic kinda ...then I thought it was wack so I didn't click send and just deleted the message. But good poem.
