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11 replies · 7510 views · Started by In Rod We Trust · Dec 2004
Here's a Poem that I wrote My baby.... -Untitled- Your body is pure never touched by a soul You looked so good I coulda swallowed you whole But I didn’t I took slow with you and got to know you better Didn’t really know how to tell you this so I wrote you this letter Early that October morning you gave yourself to me At first I didn’t know how to react because you liked to tease me I thought “Is she just testing me or is she ready for it” God knows how much I love her and how much I wanna show it So I whispered in your ear “Are you sure you wanna do this?” “Yes” you answered back and at that moment I was in bliss As we laid in the bed side by side you rubbed ya **** up against me And all that ran thru my head was pleasing you and making you just as happy as can be As you let me enter your body I could feel you tensing up I was scared I was gonna hurt you and that my entry was too abrupt You reassured me that you were fine and that everything would be alright Oh how I wished you had awaken me in the middle of that night The louder you moaned turned me on more And it seemed that you knew what was in store You gave yourself to me something no one had ever done And that instant it was if we had become one One soul, one heart, one mind The feeling was so sublime I only wish I had waited for you Cause if I had this drama I would not be going thru If only I could give you something SO pure Something that would bring a smile to your face I’m sure But until that day which is still some ways away With me is where I pray you’ll stay For you I will give my life Because it is you who will be my wife Our union was ordained in heaven Oh how I wish we had more time although it seemed like tha time went by slowly I know that you enjoyed it and that pleased me
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atlprincess · Dec 2004
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Aww...that's too sweet.
Wisdom_Tree · Dec 2004
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Go head...wheres the ring? :twisted:
The Big Girl Sweetz · Dec 2004
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that was beautiful chris
Shell813 · Dec 2004
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That was good!!!
In Rod We Trust · Dec 2004
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BigDaddy Tres wrote:
Go head...wheres the ring? :twisted:
COSIGNS............... i never saw this though................... oh baby........................
Blutifully Human · Dec 2004
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oh dear bob... alright alright alright...where's the tissue?
· Dec 2004
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my nipples got hard readin that ish. Go ahead and get on your knees and ask the girl... "DONT F--K AROUND, SAMS, GO ON AND JUMP!!!"
In Rod We Trust · Dec 2004
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jstblz99-2h2h wrote:
BigDaddy Tres wrote:
Go head...wheres the ring? :twisted:
COSIGNS............... i never saw this though................... oh baby........................
Paitence........... Thanx y'all............ y'all are all crazy tho........ :lol: :lol:
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~*Secret*~ · Jan 2005
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that was sooooo dang on beautiful...it almost made me wanna curse.....see thats why my first time has to be with someone who i know actually cares and is not just worried about gettin theirs.
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