Saddest Love Story (Writing this one as I go)

9 replies · 3673 views · Started by Wisdom_Tree · Jan 2005
Wisdom_Tree Texas City, TX
This is just a reminisce on the saddest love story ever lived. Everything, from the beginning, sitting in the living room spinning Grinning, thinking Im living the best life ever, everything Seems pleasant, kisses from the miss, its heaven Seven minutes of awkwardness then its a blessin But in actuality my words were caught in strange duality While it seems my worth was lost right when you smiled at me Ill be 'D'...amned, my heart had beat the beat with you Couldnt be a fake, I thought of death and defeat with you Life and sleep with you, starve and eat with you Put each other on pedestals, we were equal too But I took and never gave, same mistake and different place Gambled grace, lost myself in mirrors...who knew my face? I erase. I chased the wrong reason with a right mind Intended forever, cant see too far with sight blind Tryin to try, failing to find...sorry to say I apologize for falling from faith, guess sorry's too late
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· Jan 2005
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That was really good...
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chased the wrong reason with a right mind Intended forever, cant see too far with sight blind Tryin to try, failing to find...sorry to say I apologize for falling from faith, guess sorry's too late
^^^That was my favorite part!
Wisdom_Tree · Jan 2005
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MissNeeNee wrote:
That was really good...
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chased the wrong reason with a right mind Intended forever, cant see too far with sight blind Tryin to try, failing to find...sorry to say I apologize for falling from faith, guess sorry's too late
^^^That was my favorite part!
Spank you kindly... Or naughtily... mmm....Nauuughty.... :twisted: :arrow:
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· Jan 2005
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BigDaddy Tres wrote:
MissNeeNee wrote:
That was really good...
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chased the wrong reason with a right mind Intended forever, cant see too far with sight blind Tryin to try, failing to find...sorry to say I apologize for falling from faith, guess sorry's too late
^^^That was my favorite part!
Spank you kindly... Or naughtily... mmm....Nauuughty.... :twisted: :arrow:
^^Freak :lol: 8) :twisted:
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SC_Shawty · Jan 2005
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That joint was hot Im feelin it foreal
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Blutifully Human · Jan 2005
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good work Tres. The last stanza is gold
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~*Secret*~ · Jan 2005
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BigDaddy Tres wrote:
I chased the wrong reason with a right mind Intended forever, cant see too far with sight blind Tryin to try, failing to find...sorry to say I apologize for falling from faith, guess sorry's too late
so dag on talented.....i...lost for words...that was hot tres
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Wisdom_Tree · Jan 2005
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~*Secret*~ wrote:
BigDaddy Tres wrote:
I chased the wrong reason with a right mind Intended forever, cant see too far with sight blind Tryin to try, failing to find...sorry to say I apologize for falling from faith, guess sorry's too late
so dag on talented.....i...lost for words...that was hot tres
Always great to please...this was probably one of the hardest ones to write simply because I wrote it all in one sitting.*goes back to writing*
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The Big Girl Sweetz · Jan 2005
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I think you are my favorite poet......shoot writer.... scratch that... I KNOW you are....
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