hi
i admire what you wrote. most men or boys9which ever applies) wouldnt take the time to acknowledge the woman who made it possible for them to be here. When she reads it... if she reads it she will be proud that she raised an intelligent young man. all in all i really liked it. it was very nice, heart felt, and deep. i can just imagine how you would treat your girl and the lyrics you would write about her.
bye