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That cheatin', lyin' b*tch Posted on 08-29-2004
Kool 2k6

Women, dont get offended but, when i wrote this, i was in an uncontrollable rage (and i had been drinking like prohibition's next week). I'm a beginner to this poetry thing but, here goes. That cheatin, lying, b*tch. I should've know the day i looked in your eyes That your mind was full of ****, deceit and lies But all i could focus on was your face, & those thighs I feel like a fool. All because of that cheatin, lying, b*tch. I worked odd hours, never got much sleep Made good money, so i couldn't be called cheap If i gave you something, i wanted you to keep But now im outraged, because of that cheatin, lying, b*tch. I sacraficed friendships, bonds and connections And my mind was all in the wrong direction I thought that was love **** out of this ****.... Because of that cheating, lying, no-good b*tch. I found out the truth, can't believe i trusted your jive My best friend really is my .45 Meet Mister Mossberg, you dirty, filthy **** Women are never to be trusted no more Im about to get locked up for sure..... Because of that cheatin, lyin' no-good, slutty, sum-b*tch
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jadekiss replied on 09-27-2004 01:12AM [Reply]
Oh sweetheart...that's deep..
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replied on 09-27-2004 01:36AM [Reply]
JadeKiss wrote:
Oh sweetheart...that's deep..
^^I'mma have to bust a Kenya and lift him up in prayer. :lol:
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replied on 09-27-2004 04:28AM [Reply]
JadeKiss wrote:
Oh sweetheart...that's deep..
Thats prolly because you can feel my pain!
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P o e t i q R e i g n from Greensboro, NC replied on 09-29-2004 11:12AM [Reply]

Da Kool™ Iz Back wrote:
JadeKiss wrote:
Oh sweetheart...that's deep..
Thats prolly because you can feel my pain!
lol GOTTA be tha reason :lol: :lol: :lol: ya'll have both been goin' thru some thangz... shoot, haven't we all... i feel ya on ya emotionz, tho, kool....**** off feelingz'll definitely have u goin' off on a tangent lyrically...do ya thing
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replied on 09-30-2004 06:14PM [Reply]
That Biotch!!! Let's get her a$$ together. :twisted: I really feel that poem. I have been touched rather deeply. *wipes a lone tear*
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Blutifully Human from Washington, DC replied on 10-01-2004 04:27AM [Reply]

LiL fUnNy BoNe wrote:
JadeKiss wrote:
Oh sweetheart...that's deep..
^^I'mma have to bust a Kenya and lift him up in prayer. :lol:
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: *gasp* lawd help me! *gasp* Can't...breathe...too...much...laughter. Kay, i know that wasn't supposed to be funny, but it had me dying yo. Dang, that was humorous, deep, and...scary all rolled into one :? :lol: . Awwwww....woo woo woo. It's gonna be alright baby. Come ere son. Lay your head on momma's ****
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replied on 10-03-2004 06:31PM [Reply]
*PURE*Kindnezz wrote:
LiL fUnNy BoNe wrote:
JadeKiss wrote:
Oh sweetheart...that's deep..
^^I'mma have to bust a Kenya and lift him up in prayer. :lol:
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: *gasp* lawd help me! *gasp* Can't...breathe...too...much...laughter. Kay, i know that wasn't supposed to be funny, but it had me dying yo. Dang, that was humorous, deep, and...scary all rolled into one :? :lol: . Awwwww....woo woo woo. It's gonna be alright baby. Come ere son. Lay your head on momma's ****
*looks up, and dies laffin* :lol: @on momma's ****
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Wisdom_Tree from Texas City, TX replied on 10-16-2004 12:13PM [Reply]
Sorry Im late in sayin this but you know that speaks to alot of what us guys have to go through in this Game called Love. Do ya **** thizzle. (poem unratable) :arrow:
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replied on 10-16-2004 09:05PM [Reply]
lol, I could just see some brotha doing this poem in front of his ex and feeling good as hell when he's done.....glad ya got it off ya chest.
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