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That cheatin', lyin' b*tch Posted on 08-29-2004
Kool 2k6

Women, dont get offended but, when i wrote this, i was in an uncontrollable rage (and i had been drinking like prohibition's next week). I'm a beginner to this poetry thing but, here goes. That cheatin, lying, b*tch. I should've know the day i looked in your eyes That your mind was full of corruption, deceit and lies But all i could focus on was your face, & those thighs I feel like a fool. All because of that cheatin, lying, b*tch. I worked odd hours, never got much sleep Made good money, so i couldn't be called cheap If i gave you something, i wanted you to keep But now im outraged, because of that cheatin, lying, b*tch. I sacraficed friendships, bonds and connections And my mind was all in the wrong direction I thought that was love shooting out of this erection.... Because of that cheating, lying, no-good b*tch. I found out the truth, can't believe i trusted your jive My best friend really is my .45 Meet Mister Mossberg, you dirty, filthy whore Women are never to be trusted no more Im about to get locked up for sure..... Because of that cheatin, lyin' no-good, slutty, sum-b*tch
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jadekiss replied on 09-27-2004 01:12AM [Reply]
Oh sweetheart...that's deep..
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replied on 09-27-2004 01:36AM [Reply]
JadeKiss wrote:
Oh sweetheart...that's deep..
^^I'mma have to bust a Kenya and lift him up in prayer. :lol:
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replied on 09-27-2004 04:28AM [Reply]
JadeKiss wrote:
Oh sweetheart...that's deep..
Thats prolly because you can feel my pain!
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P o e t i q R e i g n from Greensboro, NC replied on 09-29-2004 11:12AM [Reply]

Da Kool™ Iz Back wrote:
JadeKiss wrote:
Oh sweetheart...that's deep..
Thats prolly because you can feel my pain!
lol GOTTA be tha reason :lol: :lol: :lol: ya'll have both been goin' thru some thangz... shoot, haven't we all... i feel ya on ya emotionz, tho, kool....pissed off feelingz'll definitely have u goin' off on a tangent lyrically...do ya thing
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replied on 09-30-2004 06:14PM [Reply]
That Biotch!!! Let's get her a$$ together. :twisted: I really feel that poem. I have been touched rather deeply. *wipes a lone tear*
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Blutifully Human replied on 10-01-2004 04:27AM [Reply]
LiL fUnNy BoNe wrote:
JadeKiss wrote:
Oh sweetheart...that's deep..
^^I'mma have to bust a Kenya and lift him up in prayer. :lol:
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: *gasp* lawd help me! *gasp* Can't...breathe...too...much...laughter. Kay, i know that wasn't supposed to be funny, but it had me dying yo. Dang, that was humorous, deep, and...scary all rolled into one :? :lol: . Awwwww....woo woo woo. It's gonna be alright baby. Come ere son. Lay your head on momma's bosom
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replied on 10-03-2004 06:31PM [Reply]
*PURE*Kindnezz wrote:
LiL fUnNy BoNe wrote:
JadeKiss wrote:
Oh sweetheart...that's deep..
^^I'mma have to bust a Kenya and lift him up in prayer. :lol:
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: *gasp* lawd help me! *gasp* Can't...breathe...too...much...laughter. Kay, i know that wasn't supposed to be funny, but it had me dying yo. Dang, that was humorous, deep, and...scary all rolled into one :? :lol: . Awwwww....woo woo woo. It's gonna be alright baby. Come ere son. Lay your head on momma's bosom
*looks up, and dies laffin* :lol: @on momma's bosom
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Wisdom_Tree replied on 10-16-2004 12:13PM [Reply]
Sorry Im late in sayin this but you know that speaks to alot of what us guys have to go through in this Game called Love. Do ya thug thizzle. (poem unratable) :arrow:
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replied on 10-16-2004 09:05PM [Reply]
lol, I could just see some brotha doing this poem in front of his ex and feeling good as hell when he's done.....glad ya got it off ya chest.
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