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Personal Experience Posted on 12-17-2004
Dr.BrandedBison, CP

Christmas rolls around and I remain lonely, But that ain't the case if you talk to my homie, One, two, three hoes, begging for that d*ck, These words bellow out his mouth way too quick, Same circumstance, I've seen it all too often, Baby girl gets played all dudes end up in a coffin, The hatred towards the gender cuz a one wrong move, Causes long- term disappointmenttowards all other dudes, Now Mr. Right comes along and recieves the backlash, Tries to change her feelings, look like he talking out his a$$, Lets just be firends, I don't want a BF, When all she really wants is the Bad Boys that are left, So they both suffer, he alone, she in vain, She, to keep an image, and he cuz he can't get Elaine
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atlprincess from College Park, GA replied on 12-17-2004 08:42AM [Reply]

Dang...I definitely know how that goes. I too have been guilty when it comes to holding grudges on ex's and taking it out on Mr. Right. Keep it up! Oh and 1 question...I don't wanna sound stupid..but who is Elaine? Is that the girl?
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replied on 12-17-2004 09:56AM [Reply]
I liked it......
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replied on 12-18-2004 09:44AM [Reply]
atlprincess wrote:
Dang...I definitely know how that goes. I too have been guilty when it comes to holding grudges on ex's and taking it out on Mr. Right. Keep it up! Oh and 1 question...I don't wanna sound stupid..but who is Elaine? Is that the girl?
Yeah Elanie is the made up name to protect thoe actual person involved
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Enigma2k8 replied on 12-26-2004 02:28AM [Reply]
Nice poem...I know EXACTLY how you feel.....Maybe (you know who :wink: ) will come to her senses some day.
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Princess LaRonda replied on 12-27-2004 12:26PM [Reply]
wow I love a man who writes poetry.... if I was Elaine...and you showed this to me.... I'd drop drawls
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