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She Just Posted on 01-20-2005
Wisdom_Tree
Texas City, TX
Years of tears, years, and I heard them all You rose when she fell, to hell, I answered the call She balled for a baller who'd play her then pay her She just wanted justice, to be saved from a savior You player, gave her false hope and now shes hopeless I wrote this...not for her, but so you would know this You used her and tosser her; all she did was care I was there, she was scared, you were unaware Faithful? She was, but she bled every night Hateful? She was, but she said every night That, despite your iniquity, without you she couldnt breathe I couldn't see, it shouldn't have been like that, she couldn't leave Believe, I watched her fall apart and tried to glue her up Glass smashed so many times...you had used her up Bruised her (heart) its your fault...this is how I found her Face up, no make up, in the water. Your abuse drowned her She just wanted you, wanted affection Your protection, but you neglected and disrespected I expected her to cry, never guessed she would die Now she lies in a river, hoping youre affected.
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replied on 01-21-2005 04:07PM [Reply]
That was soooooo hot. It was beautiful.
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In Rod We Trust replied on 01-21-2005 04:28PM [Reply]
that was DEEP lyrical genius..........................
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SC_Shawty from Columbia, SC replied on 01-22-2005 01:39AM [Reply]

ThaGr81 wrote:
that was DEEP lyrical genius..........................
I agree that joint was mad deep
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Blutifully Human from Washington, DC replied on 01-22-2005 02:51AM [Reply]

wow, this one has to be one of my favs. The whole thing flowed well and connected from start to finish. And u know i'm a stickler for a catchy ending and that one is really on point hun. Good work! :wink:
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~*Secret*~ replied on 01-24-2005 11:22AM [Reply]
dang...words cant describe how talented u are
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