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Saddest Love Story (Writing this one as I go) Posted on 01-21-2005
Wisdom_Tree
Texas City, TX
This is just a reminisce on the saddest love story ever lived. Everything, from the beginning, sitting in the living room spinning Grinning, thinking Im living the best life ever, everything Seems pleasant, kisses from the miss, its heaven Seven minutes of awkwardness then its a blessin But in actuality my words were caught in strange duality While it seems my worth was lost right when you smiled at me Ill be 'D'...amned, my heart had beat the beat with you Couldnt be a fake, I thought of death and defeat with you Life and sleep with you, starve and eat with you Put each other on pedestals, we were equal too But I took and never gave, same mistake and different place Gambled grace, lost myself in mirrors...who knew my face? I erase. I chased the wrong reason with a right mind Intended forever, cant see too far with sight blind Tryin to try, failing to find...sorry to say I apologize for falling from faith, guess sorry's too late
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replied on 01-21-2005 07:43PM [Reply]
That was really good...
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chased the wrong reason with a right mind Intended forever, cant see too far with sight blind Tryin to try, failing to find...sorry to say I apologize for falling from faith, guess sorry's too late
^^^That was my favorite part!
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Wisdom_Tree from Texas City, TX replied on 01-21-2005 08:01PM [Reply]
MissNeeNee wrote:
That was really good...
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chased the wrong reason with a right mind Intended forever, cant see too far with sight blind Tryin to try, failing to find...sorry to say I apologize for falling from faith, guess sorry's too late
^^^That was my favorite part!
Spank you kindly... Or naughtily... mmm....Nauuughty.... :twisted: :arrow:
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replied on 01-21-2005 10:08PM [Reply]
BigDaddy Tres wrote:
MissNeeNee wrote:
That was really good...
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chased the wrong reason with a right mind Intended forever, cant see too far with sight blind Tryin to try, failing to find...sorry to say I apologize for falling from faith, guess sorry's too late
^^^That was my favorite part!
Spank you kindly... Or naughtily... mmm....Nauuughty.... :twisted: :arrow:
^^Freak :lol: 8) :twisted:
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SC_Shawty from Columbia, SC replied on 01-22-2005 01:35AM [Reply]

That joint was hot Im feelin it foreal
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Blutifully Human from Washington, DC replied on 01-22-2005 02:41AM [Reply]

good work Tres. The last stanza is gold
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~*Secret*~ replied on 01-24-2005 11:25AM [Reply]
BigDaddy Tres wrote:
I chased the wrong reason with a right mind Intended forever, cant see too far with sight blind Tryin to try, failing to find...sorry to say I apologize for falling from faith, guess sorry's too late
so dag on talented.....i...lost for words...that was hot tres
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Wisdom_Tree from Texas City, TX replied on 01-24-2005 01:37PM [Reply]
~*Secret*~ wrote:
BigDaddy Tres wrote:
I chased the wrong reason with a right mind Intended forever, cant see too far with sight blind Tryin to try, failing to find...sorry to say I apologize for falling from faith, guess sorry's too late
so dag on talented.....i...lost for words...that was hot tres
Always great to please...this was probably one of the hardest ones to write simply because I wrote it all in one sitting.*goes back to writing*
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The Big Girl Sweetz replied on 01-26-2005 03:06PM [Reply]
I think you are my favorite poet......shoot writer.... scratch that... I KNOW you are....
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