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just a thought Posted on 06-09-2005
Miss. Soulful

oh man oh man i just walked through the door from a long walk outside you wouldn't believe what once thrive has now died i can't believe we let it get this bad, when he came to sacrifice, it's really sad thought we would be more grateful. instead we grow each day being more hateful. you won't believe those who claim they don't know however his word is on earth, so... i'll do my part which is the least i could do for his sake i wonder how he feels to see what took 7 days to make all go to waste forgiving he is, understanding he is, loving he is, but why all we had to do was follow the rules, he promised we wouldn't die. now you sit around all confused, praying to him asking what to do, and there are millions of people just like you. millions of problems millions of people,just one book, it was all he gave, it was all thats left, thats all it took
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Wisdom_Tree replied on 06-10-2005 12:13AM [Reply]
Great write! I liked that alot for some reason...*rubs his chin*
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Katrice94 replied on 06-10-2005 01:53PM [Reply]
^^^ i agree. I really enjoyed it
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Miss. Soulful replied on 06-11-2005 10:19PM [Reply]
completely off the top of my head thanks
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lykehoney replied on 06-12-2005 09:38PM [Reply]
oh i was feelin this! It's really good
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oOoDazzlingDanceroOo replied on 06-13-2005 08:46PM [Reply]
Katrice94 wrote:
^^^ i agree. I really enjoyed it
Cosigns.
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