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"Proclamation" and "I Promise" (2nd one Posted on 06-16-2005
Wisdom_Tree

Proclamation For a future uncertain, and a love so majestic Passion, fall like curtains; leave doubt and forget it And for the life I had before you I am not him; forgive. I implore you You know my eyes, that I adore you So awesome and clear with no more hue Promise me please youll be at my least To remind my purpose and put me at ease Deny me my wants and feed me my needs I'll be finding peace once I'm on my knees Passion, fall like curtains, leave doubt and forget it For a future uncertain, and a love so majestic. - Fin _________ I Promise To judge you not of your past When cold, my warm love i down cast Blanket over you in all honesty To provide for your needs, fullfill every fantasy I see clearly the love before me, In all honesty i place my heart before thee, To see how you've cured it of all pain, Of all cuts, of all bruises, you've stopped the rain, Never to judge you but for whom you are at heart, I know in the past...love's hurt us both, but in all purity, And honesty, in Love is how our True love will start. - Fin
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Miss. Soulful replied on 06-18-2005 11:13PM [Reply]
beautiful, you have a wonderful way with words
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Wisdom_Tree replied on 06-20-2005 08:02PM [Reply]
Miss. Soulful wrote:
beautiful, you have a wonderful way with words
Thanks a bunch *big hugs*
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theatira replied on 09-23-2005 10:22AM [Reply]
great :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: use of words
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Wisdom_Tree replied on 09-25-2005 04:21PM [Reply]
For future notice, the first poem is mine, and the second was written by a female poet who Read mine.
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