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Dear Mama Posted on 08-10-2005
Sed_Ated

Like Chris, I know I promised you the house on the wheels And in a little bit of time you'll have the house on the hills I love you for real There's no mistaking, when I needed you you would come to the couch to just chill Pops gone all day, moms out workin too Decision time came and you ended up burping who? Me and my brother, that's why I love you mother Givin up ya career to help us through the years Knowing that you were here if my homework put me through the ringer Or even just to kiss a little boo boo on my pinky finger You never left, and I know till death You'll bleed, love, and hug till you have nothing left That's why whatever I get, whatever I achieve Whatever I'll have is yours just like you did for me You'll never be poor, forget social security That's your reward for always enduring me And I know it wasn't easy, you could say it was hard Somehow we always make it through by the grace of God Pops I love you too, but this is mama's time to shine We're going through a tough time so I'm sitting down rhyming lines No matter how much we scream and fight We'll always have love so it'll be alright It ain't mother's day, aint a special occasion But it doesn't have to be for me to let you know that you're amazing I truly love you You are appreciated...
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SC_Shawty from Columbia, SC replied on 08-10-2005 03:50AM [Reply]

Joint was definitely hot Sed...you got it homie.
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Spizz from BOSTON, MA replied on 08-23-2005 02:35AM [Reply]

P.E.A.C.E. Sed_Ated! This is a dope dedication piece/peace. It flowed real well & I could here Tupac's instrumental playin' in my head when I read it. Enjoyed checkin' this out 4real. Lines that really struck me something awful were: "Somehow we always make it through by the grace of God Pops I love you too, but this is mama's time to shine We're going through a tough time so I'm sitting down rhyming lines No matter how much we scream and fight We'll always have love so it'll be alright It ain't mother's day, aint a special occasion But it doesn't have to be for me to let you know that you're amazing I truly love you " Keep buildin' bro & Stay Blessed! P}lease E}ncourage A}ll C}hildren E}verywhere 1ne <3 ~*~SpizzDaPoet(r)ess~*~
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replied on 08-26-2005 02:44AM [Reply]
Thanks Spizz and Ti Ti
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