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Words... Posted on 05-13-2004
Riley

Don't know wether to call it a rap, poetry or just words on paper but this is somethin' i wrote awhile ago before i decided to go back to school... I could have blamed my father, But I knew I was failing myself Cuz only thing i was into was sellin' the melt couldn't talk to nobody, about the the hell that i felt so i walked with a .38 and extra shells by my belt I had click...If u crossed them, you crossed us then they crossed me so i lost friends and lost trust almost got robbed, reached for the gun and he bust I got grazed...so i cocked back and he got shot in the leg My whole life growing up, i knew alot for my age I stopped dukin' it out and became accustomed to shootouts Couldn't live by rules, so i left mom dukes house never meant to hurt her, but i just had to let the truth out I ran the streets wild, seemed like they had adopted me i fvcked up my flip money, i was playin' the game sloppily got back on top and older females started jockin' me the sooner i got my weight up, the more they felt like lockin' me but a couple months I got free, Bettered my knowledge position started putting the drug money towards my college tuition conversated with god and got more involved in religion
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replied on 05-13-2004 10:00AM [Reply]
I'm feelin u.
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P o e t i q R e i g n from Greensboro, NC replied on 05-13-2004 10:37AM [Reply]

tru2daheart wrote:
I'm feelin u.
cosign, I was feelin' the whole thing...but it all, these lines are my favorite...
Riley Freeman wrote:
I had click...If u crossed them, you crossed us then they crossed me so i lost friends and lost trust
I can relate to them so much...
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replied on 05-13-2004 11:12AM [Reply]
thanks for the feedback
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In Rod We Trust replied on 05-13-2004 01:06PM [Reply]
Ayo man that some real hot shyt. Im willin to bet everybody on the site can relate to this in some way or another
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replied on 05-13-2004 03:34PM [Reply]
Riley Freeman wrote:
Don't know wether to call it a rap, poetry or just words on paper but this is somethin' i wrote awhile ago before i decided to go back to school... I could have blamed my father, But I knew I was failing myself Cuz only thing i was into was sellin' the melt couldn't talk to nobody, about the the hell that i felt so i walked with a .38 and extra shells by my belt I had click...If u crossed them, you crossed us then they crossed me so i lost friends and lost trust almost got robbed, reached for the gun and he bust I got grazed...so i cocked back and he got shot in the leg My whole life growing up, i knew alot for my age I stopped dukin' it out and became accustomed to shootouts Couldn't live by rules, so i left mom dukes house never meant to hurt her, but i just had to let the truth out I ran the streets wild, seemed like they had adopted me i fvcked up my flip money, i was playin' the game sloppily got back on top and older females started jockin' me the sooner i got my weight up, the more they felt like lockin' me but a couple months I got free, Bettered my knowledge position started putting the drug money towards my college tuition conversated with god and got more involved in religion
Will you be my husband lol
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Wisdom_Tree replied on 05-13-2004 03:41PM [Reply]
ChoklatPoet wrote:
Riley Freeman wrote:
Don't know wether to call it a rap, poetry or just words on paper but this is somethin' i wrote awhile ago before i decided to go back to school... I could have blamed my father, But I knew I was failing myself Cuz only thing i was into was sellin' the melt couldn't talk to nobody, about the the hell that i felt so i walked with a .38 and extra shells by my belt I had click...If u crossed them, you crossed us then they crossed me so i lost friends and lost trust almost got robbed, reached for the gun and he bust I got grazed...so i cocked back and he got shot in the leg My whole life growing up, i knew alot for my age I stopped dukin' it out and became accustomed to shootouts Couldn't live by rules, so i left mom dukes house never meant to hurt her, but i just had to let the truth out I ran the streets wild, seemed like they had adopted me i fvcked up my flip money, i was playin' the game sloppily got back on top and older females started jockin' me the sooner i got my weight up, the more they felt like lockin' me but a couple months I got free, Bettered my knowledge position started putting the drug money towards my college tuition conversated with god and got more involved in religion
Will you be my husband lol
Oh REALLY Tya? *leaves, shakin his head*
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In Rod We Trust replied on 05-13-2004 08:31PM [Reply]
i'm glad you ha a change of life. we need more eduated brothers, the ratio of males to females is terribly off. :wink:
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shanise94 replied on 05-14-2004 12:50AM [Reply]
Im definately feelin u...that hit close to home man. That was hot though
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replied on 05-14-2004 10:33AM [Reply]
ChoklatPoet wrote:
Riley Freeman wrote:
Don't know wether to call it a rap, poetry or just words on paper but this is somethin' i wrote awhile ago before i decided to go back to school... I could have blamed my father, But I knew I was failing myself Cuz only thing i was into was sellin' the melt couldn't talk to nobody, about the the hell that i felt so i walked with a .38 and extra shells by my belt I had click...If u crossed them, you crossed us then they crossed me so i lost friends and lost trust almost got robbed, reached for the gun and he bust I got grazed...so i cocked back and he got shot in the leg My whole life growing up, i knew alot for my age I stopped dukin' it out and became accustomed to shootouts Couldn't live by rules, so i left mom dukes house never meant to hurt her, but i just had to let the truth out I ran the streets wild, seemed like they had adopted me i fvcked up my flip money, i was playin' the game sloppily got back on top and older females started jockin' me the sooner i got my weight up, the more they felt like lockin' me but a couple months I got free, Bettered my knowledge position started putting the drug money towards my college tuition conversated with god and got more involved in religion
Will you be my husband lol
:lol: :lol:
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